Looking for some constructive critisism on my logo

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by tbh, Sep 2, 2007.

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    Tell me what you think .. how to better it , etc.
    This is more like a header type thing.
     
    tbh, Sep 2, 2007 IP
  2. unr.

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    #2
    Not bad.
    But how is that vial redefining design? :\
    That's the sole part that doesn't fit to me.
    Otherwise, it's not bad.
    Try adding an orange inner-flame to that yellow flame. :)
     
    unr., Sep 2, 2007 IP
  3. tbh

    tbh Peon

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    #3
    I dont know, I just like burning things. Think I will add an inner-flame, thanks.

    I don't really know how to make a graphical representation of design/graphics/marketing.

    IDK, I was thinking, how chemicals change states, the old design can become something new and fresh.

    eh?
     
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    #4
    I suppose that works. :\

    Ever hear of kwaku?
    He did a design similar (though, his was a pill) and it was more cartoony.
    Try going for that approach?

    Check him out,

    http://kwaku.deviantart.com
     
    unr., Sep 2, 2007 IP
  5. tbh

    tbh Peon

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    #5
    Too many wierd connotations if what you're saying is I should try a pill.

    I think the style is the same. Except for a bubble highlight he has, which I might on later on.

    He has some good stuff though, thanks for the link.
     
    tbh, Sep 3, 2007 IP
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    #6
    NO problem, I'm full of them.


    and I don't mean, make a pill.
    I mean, make it cartoonish like that, more simplistic then yours.
     
    unr., Sep 3, 2007 IP
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    pratik Notable Member

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    #7
    well the logo looks nice to me.

    But the only thing that is hurting me is the yellow used for the term "xenf"... This looks somewhat cheap to me. The gradient work can be done more nicely.
    Also, the flame at the top is the best part.

    Overall the logo is not bad at all.
     
    pratik, Sep 3, 2007 IP
  8. digitalphoenix

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    #8
    Looks nice.But try changing the size of the text "xenf"Its way too big compared to the logo.Also change its color to match the logo.
     
    digitalphoenix, Sep 3, 2007 IP
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    #9
    My advice is to drop the reflection and graduations. Make it work without effects before thinking about them.

    Logos need an idea, first and foremost.
     
    davidair, Sep 3, 2007 IP
  10. tbh

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    #10
    the logo is just the test tube thingy, the rest is a header type thing.
     
    tbh, Sep 3, 2007 IP
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    that's cool enough for me:)but the colors..I don't really like it..why it is not red and black?or maybe gradient red?
     
    reezluv, Sep 4, 2007 IP
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    #12
    its good looking but its a lil big and i dont like the colors alot :(
     
    bryandy, Sep 4, 2007 IP
  13. NoobieDoobieDo

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    #13
    I like it. Good deal.

    ps. I think the colors are fine.
     
    NoobieDoobieDo, Sep 4, 2007 IP
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    #14
    Looks good, just curious what's the size you are going to use that logo.
     
    bobchrist, Sep 4, 2007 IP
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    #15
    The logo is ok, however you should consider increasing the size of the tagline and test tube graphic, because "xenf.com" is overwhelmingly large compared to them. They wont be legible at smaller sizes in the logo's current state.
     
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  16. tbh

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    #16
    this is like the header for the intro/about page. ill resize the text/logo ratio and move it around when its on the actual site, i just posted the bigger version because its easier to see.

    and i doubt i will be changing the colors. I don't see anything wrong with them except that they're unconventional, and i like that.
     
    tbh, Sep 4, 2007 IP