I've been working on my first adult web offering - http://suckittube.com - and I'd like some constructive criticism. I'm not a programmer, and I'm more left brain than right brain (i.e. crayons are creative to me) so, even though I like the layout, I'd like to get some input from the third party matrix. Keep in mind that it's a work in progress. It is a lot better than it used to be (see sansuzen for an example of my initial attempt), but I still have a lot more changes in mind for it. I'd just like to know if I'm on the right track. I'd like to be very clear - this is NOT an attempt to generate traffic. I want to hear your honest and downright candid impression of the site - positive and negative. Thanks in advance!