I put a site up last October and have had a fair amount of success with hits. I want to convert more stoppers, to shoppers, and ultimately buyers. I'm wondering if there are some changes that web pros may suggest I make to improve the delivery of the content to my prospective customers. The site is in my signature. Thanks.
The site reads like an advert more than a place I would like to stay and read. There is way too much info on the pages. Thin out the content and the visitor may understand what they are doing there.
Thanks for the input - I'll be revising this (as soon as I slow down a bit) to reflect your suggestions.
well...it is supposed to advertise this promotion to my market. My thougts, based on the comments, are that I need to do a better job explaining the benefits of the promotion, adding client testimonials, etc. I am in the advertising business so it doesn't entirely surprise me that it may look like an advertising site. Thanks.
well...it is supposed to be an advertisement to some extent to present this to my target market. My thoughts are, based on the comments, that I need to do a better job explaining the benefits of the promotion, adding client testimonials, etc. I am in the advertising business so it doesn't entirely surprise me that it may look like an advertising site. But I don't want it to be just that. Thanks.
I like the layout of the site. I would just try to make it a little more clear. It's hard for me to understand exactly what it's all about by just a first glance of the site.