I want to first say that this ad looks phenomenal but here are some things that you want want to take another look at. 1. The lady in this picture looks a little bit too fake in my opinion. 2. I would want the words "Content Management" to stand out more along with the words "10 / M ". 3. Depending on where this ad placement would be I would either shrink the amount of words that you have or not. Personally I think asking a person to read through two paragraphs is a little bit much. Max Serp
In my opinion, you should take away the lady altogether and make the computer much larger. Also, sum up all that small writing into 2-3 sentences and make it larger. -Tony