Looking For feedback on landing page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by awcguy, Sep 14, 2011.

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    Hey everyone I recently started a website and wanted to get some feedback on what you think about it.

    I want to inform people on how to better there marketing game and be a place for assisting poeple too..

    my autoresponder has a series set up already on top notch industry items.

    Please check here:

    http://darrenhodgson.org/
     
    awcguy, Sep 14, 2011 IP
  2. JayNine

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    That's a good landing page. Straight to the point, catchy headline, and an opt-in box on the right hand side. The only thing that I was curious about was "The #1 resource that will ____ into the search engines instantly!" I don't really understand that line... But I was enticed enough to opt-in!
     
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  3. awcguy

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    jayNine - Appreciate your feedback and thank you for signing up. Good catch on that line, I will update it..
     
    awcguy, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    good landing page very effective. maybe just add an image of your product (DVD or ebook whatever). Looks good.
     
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    Thanks tupacmo - There is no product per say just a series of messages on affiliate/internet marketing.

    But are you saying I need to add a picture of some kind>?
     
    awcguy, Sep 15, 2011 IP
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    Yes, it would look good if you can add some picture...may be the cover page of your stuff.
     
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    Add some more graphics to your landing page otherwise its looking perfect for the colors, professional work
     
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    Thank you - DavidWincent and RightTurn for your feedback.

    I am looking for a decent infographic for the page to best describe in a picture form what I am offering though my list.

    If you guys come back to this forum post again, please let me your thoughts on the picture I should have.

    *** I just want to say thank you to all the people who have signed up! - I would really appreciate your comments at my blog on the topics I am covering and input on your ideas as well. - Links are included in the emails.
     
    awcguy, Sep 17, 2011 IP