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I do not think it gets to the point at all...Scrolling down seeing the same picture for 24 times will make a lot of people give up. I did anyway...never reached the bottom of the page. What is the point of having the same thing all over and over again. There are other ways to emphasize that there are 24 videos.
I love when they say "Massive 75% Commission". All clickbank products are 75%, well the good ones anyway. Your site sucks but instead of just saying that, let me help you out a bit. 1. Hire a copywriter to add some text in there. You need a sales page and all you have is pictures of your product. 2. Remove some pictures. My God, we dont need to see the ecover you made 90 times. 3. Instead of just saying Video #1, Video #2, show screen shots of the sections. that part of your page just looks like a mess and very unattractive. 4. Your grammar is not the best. A prof. copywriter will help with this. 5. I would change your bonus pictures to relate to what you are offering. If you have 3 bonuses, have 3 different pictures. Then it wont look like the same thing you are trying to sell. It just blows my mind how many people spend a lot of money and time developing a cool product like this but then scimp on the most important part...the selling of the product! Good Luck to you!
I agree with rjd1265... You do need to tidy it up somewhat as its kind of rough around the edges and looks like some school kid made the site on the weekend. Good luck with your product though.
I took a look and although I agree with the comments that suggest you need someone to look over the content, I have seen worse sites, and whats more I have seen worse sites sell on Flippa. Anyway I have a very contentious point to make and it is one that would "in my mind as a newbie" think you were full of BS. There is one section of the page that says something, or at least very strongly implies something that is not true. In essence you are lying to people right there on the sales page!! This would have "automatically" turned me away from your site and any affiliate site that contained the same copy. Okay so I am a copywriter, content provider, and professional proof reader, but what I found took me all of 2 minutes, and it was simply because my mind said to me at one place on the page "hang on a moment, that is not what was said further up the page!" Hope this helps - Read over your copy diligently! It is the window to your store. If people don't like what they see on the window, they will walk right past.