Looking for a review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by maxi991, Nov 12, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hi,
    I had made a website sometime back in the running niche. I wanted to put it up for sale now, can someone please review it and let me know how much it could be worth.

    www.totaltrainingclub.com - this is the sales page.
    www.totaltrainingclub.com/member - this is the members area

    thanks,
    maxi
     
    maxi991, Nov 12, 2007 IP
  2. bquast

    bquast Active Member

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    #2
    looks like every other single site that sells ebooks they make everything to bright and to big, I hate the way that people make them, but i guess simple is the best way to sell ebooks but for the life of me i cannot figure out why people don't actually create a website design that is tailored to their specific ebook, not follow what the past 30 others have done selling the exact same e-book.
     
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  3. jainmanoj

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    #3
    I like your site and concept, You can put torchlight on design and make it enhance or better. Rest ok.
     
    jainmanoj, Nov 13, 2007 IP
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    #4
    good information and clear design
     
    Tasameem, Nov 13, 2007 IP
  5. voidit

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    #5
    Hello,
    You should work more on the logo, i think you can invest a little to make a better logo.
     
    voidit, Nov 13, 2007 IP
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    #6
    Nice site. Neat and clean.
     
    crazycatsville, Nov 13, 2007 IP
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    #7
    I don't think you need to have the text that big. Some more graphics (of healthy, young, good looking people) would add a lot. Young couple laughing, fit young woman jogging (ties in with the trainer). And please, change colors! It needs to feel fresh, healthy, happy! Black and red are probably the worst colors you could choose.

    Keep it up!
     
    oscarbaby, Nov 15, 2007 IP
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    #8
    As mentioned by Oscarbaby, need to add more graphics and change the colors
     
    bobbyswebzone, Nov 15, 2007 IP
  9. 5ynaptic

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    #9
    Definitely needs a logo. These canned landing pages for e-booksall tend to look the same after a while. Freshen it up with some different colors and images. The black/red/white canned look always makes me click BACK.
     
    5ynaptic, Nov 15, 2007 IP
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    #10
    nice site and concept
     
    Dadony, Nov 16, 2007 IP
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    A few pictures would be no harm, and i think the black background must go.
     
    webmastersmallorca, Nov 16, 2007 IP