Logo

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Cole, Nov 2, 2009.

  1. #1
    I just wanted to get some feedback on a WIP logo I'm designing.

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    Cole, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  2. ibrahimzcl

    ibrahimzcl Peon

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    #2
    clean and fresh. I like it!
     
    ibrahimzcl, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  3. ktkps

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    #3
    I think the brain thing inside the cup, if it is pinkish, it would look great!
     
    ktkps, Nov 2, 2009 IP
  4. kumara1234

    kumara1234 Active Member

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    #4
    I think the background color doesn't match with the logo... specially with the cup part. The logo will work on a white bkg.

    Edit: I just noticed that the font color is also white. So you can try a different color scheme for the cup part then.
     
    Last edited: Nov 3, 2009
    kumara1234, Nov 3, 2009 IP
  5. Kerosene

    Kerosene Alpha & Omega™ Staff

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    #5
    I actually kinda like it. It took me a minute to realize what it said though.

    A little bit of gradient, and some shadow on the text might be worth trying ;)


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    Kerosene, Nov 3, 2009 IP
  6. safi12

    safi12 Greenhorn

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    #6
    looks nice and clean
     
    safi12, Nov 3, 2009 IP
  7. parthi2parthi

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    #7
    Shadow doesn't look good
     
    parthi2parthi, Nov 4, 2009 IP
  8. gxatzis30

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    #8
    Its very nice but i believe you need some help from a profesional designer.
     
    gxatzis30, Nov 4, 2009 IP
  9. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #9
    Is it meant to say 'MindSlurp'? It seems quite unclear as to whether/what the cup stands for in an alphabetical context. Other than that, looks very clean and nice. I also like Keroscenes' contribution, makes it stand out a little more.
     
    Hecky, Nov 4, 2009 IP
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  10. shaeeee

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    #10
    Love the concept! Although I dont think the water in the cup is necessary, and perhaps it would be better if the cup wasnt replacing the "l", its a little hard to tell as its not a straight rectangle shape like the letter.

    Just some thoughts :)
     
    shaeeee, Nov 9, 2009 IP
  11. crumblepie

    crumblepie Well-Known Member

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    #11
    The colors, image, font used are perfect. What I would do if this was my logo is to move the image in between the two words, and add an 'l' in slurp.
     
    crumblepie, Nov 9, 2009 IP
  12. nithimalhotra14

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    #12
    its looking very nice, but the color is looking more darkness
     
    nithimalhotra14, Nov 10, 2009 IP
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    #13
    I have to agree with all the others. The concept is great, but the "L" should be a bit more readable.
     
    jimairon, Nov 11, 2009 IP
  14. Queen Beez Handbags

    Queen Beez Handbags Member

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    #14
    Kerosene's got it right but use an "L". Place the cup in between the 2 words instead - mind...slurp.
     
    Queen Beez Handbags, Nov 11, 2009 IP
  15. winger

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    #15
    The concept is good, I'd lose the shadow on the cup and as someone before me said try replacing the cup with an actual 'l' and putting the cup between the two words. I think the font is a tad too thick when compared with the composition of the cup but that's just me. Good work nonetheless.
     
    winger, Nov 12, 2009 IP
  16. blue2x

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    #16
    if i were to decide, id take out of the glass and put it in the left, and put a real letter l , the mark is good , you dont need to integrate it with the text
     
    blue2x, Nov 19, 2009 IP
  17. xnarutogodx

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    #17
    Looks nice and easy
     
    xnarutogodx, Nov 19, 2009 IP
  18. cleverBrand

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    #18
    looks very clean and professional, but the shadow doesn't look good.
     
    cleverBrand, Nov 21, 2009 IP
  19. Networxnz

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    #19
    I think this is more better. Just do something with the color harmony. Try to explore with the blending options also in Adobe Photoshop. But overall, this is exceptionally wonderful.
     
    Networxnz, Nov 25, 2009 IP
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    #20
    I agree with previous statements. Put the glass between the two words and have an actual 'L' in there.
     
    Jawdan, Nov 25, 2009 IP