Hi, Just wondering if I could get some thoughts on my logo concepts. Which one do you prefer (or do you not like either of them)? Can you suggest any changes or improvements? Please be honest, and if you don't like them, just say! Thanks in advance. 1) 2)
hmm: 1. add darker Colors 2. Delete the "besend" text under the logo [only if u use it as a Enterpage,leave it. But as logo delete the text] 3. Stroke the "e" word with Black color !
Second one is good. I disagree. Stroking it black wont make any difference than taking the nitch out of the logo. Blue black combination is good. If "e" can be bought little more lower, It will be better is what I feel!!
If you're talking about the company, its just a general umbrella company for other businesses offering different products etc. So the logo can't really incorporate anything related to the business itself.
I like the first one, but 'weave' the two together. Like at some points, put the black over the blue, and then the blue over the black (so they look intertwined).
I also like the first one better. As it has been said try to remove the "curly" design and somehow interwoven the two letters together. Also, I like the text but it depends in what way you are looking to use the logo (if you put it on a website, it depends how it will look with or without the text underneath).
I think the first one look more better then second one. I like your logo color combination but you need to focus on typography.
A good logo should work in small sizes too; you should look at your 1st draft at a smaller size - the thing that you've made where e and b intersects it will not have to much sense at small size.