Contest Logo for Website - $50 for first place - also $5 for 2nd and $5 for 3rd place

Here it is, its better of course, i think!

 

feedback appreciated...

 

Great competition going on here. Good luck all

 

Any replies on behalf of contest holder...

Here is another version..

 

my try
100% vector

 

hey tickey. you've got talent in designing. Check out my signature. It'll be great if you could be a designer there.

 

Thank you all for the continued efforts. Apologies for not responding for a couple of days but we had a long weekend here in the US for President's Day Holiday and I was traveling with family

But there are some great revisions and new designs here. My comments on all of them:

Nivedhithan - The revisions with smaller size graphic are much better. I like the first version best - without the extra lines next to the D. There is too much going on with 2 artistic elements together on this. I like the cleaner look of just the circular logo image. The only other edit: Please put the 2 words together as one - so no separation (space) between the two. And if I could ask, I would also like to see what it would look like if you put the image to the LEFT of the words (instead of on top as it is right now) and then maybe also what it would look like if you rotate it about 45 degrees so that the points are in different places. Thanks!

masjacky - the revision on your original one is great - with the stronger fonts and thicker look. But I must say that I would actually like your first one on the new submissions better! (The one with the red rectangle and the head over the D). It has a strong presence and looks clean while incorporating many elements - especially with the character on the first letter. The eagle is great too - but I think that it would be too much going on in the logo for me with that. Also the United States Postal Service uses an eagle, so I would not want to make it somehow associate with them But for now I think we should only keep on going with this new one that I mentioned. I like how it is now - but if you have any specific ideas for slight revisions then give it a try...maybe just a different font, or thickness...(?). Otherwise, great job!

tickey - I like the colors on your new design and as some others have said, you certainly have talent. But I am just not sure that this one fits with what I am looking for. I know I said on another one of the logos that I like the "box" that they incorporated, but with the image here and the people around it I am getting more of an impression when I see it that there are people "praying around a table"...haha. Maybe you have some other ideas of something even more simple - not necessarily that much art/images that you might have to incorporate. Thank you for the effort!

christ4404 - looks better a bit, but the only big problem here is that you switched the order of the words. It would be important to have M0B on the bottom since that's what the company name is... And I still like the concept like I said, but at the same time, to give you my honest impression, I feel like it is something that would fit well in a "cartoon" or "comic" because of the style of the art and the look of it. It's very artistic and genuine, which I like. Yet I think what will fit my concept and website best is a more modern, web 2.0 looking concept that has more "abstract" features to it rather than the realistic image that you created. But thank you for your good work and sharing your talent!

MantisArt - thank you for your submission and joining the contest. I do like the quality of the logo and it's interesting to see one with more colors, but I am afraid that this just repeats some of the other ones we've seen with a slight variations on the look and feel. As I commented to tickey above, this type of design with people around a box, which I understand would very well represent both words in the company name...just looks too much to me like people are praying - because of the holding hands and togetherness. But thank you for taking the time!

hpgraphic - thank you also for joining and contributing. You certainly brought some new colors and perspective to this. However, on the first one, with the graphic/illustration D for the beginning, I don't see the fit for the concept fully in my eyes...and the D, because it's part of that O circle, actually looks a bit separated and at first I didn't even recognize that the D is hidden in there. I also get the impression that it's half of a car tire with the shape of it and inside circle as well. Your second version with the dice is more interesting - although on that one I would say that the font style is a bit too "playful" maybe and the "DM" in the dice does not have much "presence" and "strength" with the thinner font and light color...

jtoms - thanks also for joining and your submission. I do like the general feel of your logo. I like the strength that the man portrays - and the colors are nice too. The font is OK too, although maybe you can even add some more color to the words like having them in 2 colors instead of one. The only thing I am unsure about is what the man is holding. I think you were probably trying to have this be a box, but it looks somewhat like a house to me (with a roof). Also, the man seems a bit separated from the words, especially with the curve/bend he has. Maybe you can push him lower or integrate better. Thanks!

redeemer - I like these! Great new concepts added to the mix. Seems like you were thinking outside the box and not continuing on ideas of some logos that we already have. The first version is a bit too "robotic" for me, but the other 2 are great. I have a hard time picking my favorite, but I think the one with the guys/men standing might be better because it goes more with the name of the company...(yet the "fireballs" show good strength too). Maybe you could play around with a different font, and even try some different colors. I like these ones, but might be too many (with the last guy in the image also turning yellow). I also think that it would be better without the lines by the D since there will be too much elements with both that and the guys/image. Thanks for the submission!

gipanuhotko - thanks for entering the contest. I like that yours is simple. But I am afraid that maybe a bit too simple...(?) The feel of it is good, but maybe a bit too "light". The circular arrow also makes it seem like "we're going in circles" - as in "repeating", which might not be the right message. It should be movement, but movement towards "progress" not necessarily in a loop.

HerDish - I like both of your design concepts - they're simple yet effective. Although the arrows might seem to fit better with the movement, I actually like the blue square a bit more because it seems to show more solid strength and it's a nicer symbol in my eyes. While it looks great on black, the website will most likely be white - so the ones on white are the ones to work with. While the blue symbol and blue colors are great - maybe you can work with the words a bit more. The font is not my favorite, and also please combine the two words. I like most the second one where the symbol is to the left. Maybe the word M0b can even be blue again (?)

Thanks to everyone. We still have a few days to go. Maybe I'll even extend into Saturday...

 

Thanks very much for detailed feedback. Let me think about new concept as I am very much interested in getting at least $5 from you

 

thanks for your feedback any change you desire can be done when selected and i wish i atleast get 5$ for it...!!

 

Thank you for the feedback.

 

tickey - ooh...nice job on this one! I certainly like this one most from all of yours. It's very clean, crisp, and a good mix of colors. I like the font. Some changes maybe around the swoosh/line from the R that comes out. I think you were looking to make this like "arms" of a person and the circle/dot there is the head. I like the thought around this for sure - but it actually look me a bit to realize why there is a circle on that line. I wouldn't want any confusion when someone sees it - so maybe even without that at all would be best. Just the extended R to the box would be OK I think. And is there anything else instead of the box that could fit there to help represent the logo...(?) I don't have any specific ideas, and I think box could be OK, just that not everything everyone will deliver will be in a box... Unless you have any other ideas for an image in there, this should be fine for now to move on with. Thanks!

redeemer - thanks for the quick edits as well. I definitely like the blue colors more. I think my favorite is the top one, with the two guys. The font is also better now, but still maybe some work on the font style (I prefer not to be italicized or slanted as it is now) - and also maybe a thicker/stronger look with the "M0b"...maybe even switching so that De1ivery can be the thinner one. Maybe you have some ideas around this as well to edit a bit on the font style only. Thanks!

 

again, thanks for a great review and also, good to see you like my efforts I will work on the suggestion tomorrow morning, as its night here.
Thanks again.

 

Hey, thanks for the reply, i appreciated

I rearranged the text


Here is a new design that i hope you like it. You have 3 to chose from.

 

thank for feedback..
here is my revision..