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Mine:

 

My entry:

 

Thanks for all of the entries. I thought I would add a sample image that this logo would be applied to:



I need the colors to pop so that they are not blending in too much. The new logo would replace the existing text on the image.

--->UPDATE<--- I need to change the name of the graphic to Bill Fox All-Inclusive Vacations. Sorry, it is legal issue.

Here is an old text-only version of this graphic:



This is for example only to show what had been used years ago.

I'll provide detailed feedback a bit later in another post.
Thanks!

 

Hi there. Here is my revision:



Cheers!

 

Revised concept
Ok, I changed the gold to white & added "Bill Fox" as per your project changes, I also snipped the header sample you provided so that you can see what my concept would look like ontop of that water color section. (I had to manipulate the header of course to get rid of the Jamaica text for this sample, so it's a little off, but it gives you an idea)



Feedback Appreciated​

 

MantisArt: I like the colors and font for All-Inclusive Vacatios, but do not like the font for "Bill Fox" I would delete the palm tree and swiggle too please. I like "Bill Fox" in a script or handwriting style, just not this one.

scorpionagency : I like the All-Inclusive portion both font and colors, but not the Bill Fox or Vacations. For Bill Fox an easy to read script would be my first choice and a bolder Vacations. For use on this image, I would drop the art on the left side too please. Thanks!

jokomamamita: Bill Fox is way too large and they rest looks pretty good. Maybe All-Inclusive Vacations larger and Bill Fox a lot smaller.


chlopzmazur: I like your logo a lot and would like to see it on a white background and also on the above beach image. Thanks!

cil13: I like it except Vacations is too light of blue and does not pop for me. If you can add it to the beach image so I can see what it might look like, it would really help me. Thank you.

 

Revised concept
Eliminated the graphic, Thickened "Vacation", used a stylish & legible script for "Bill Fox)



Feedback appreciated​

 

hi, my designs...

Design 1:



Design 2:

 

Thanks for your feedback. Here is my revision:

 

According to feedback:

 

Ok, with about 12 hours left in the contest, here is my feedback:

scorpionagency: Much better! These fonts are easier for me to read

ruizelfiero: Probably tied as my favorite so far. One typo though. "Vacations" needs an "s" on the end of it and I would like to see it on a white background.

chlopzmazur: Tied for first. I really like the design, but not 100% sure if I'm sold on the color scheme. If you have time, maybe you could play with the use of colors.

jokomamamita: Much better, though I still feel "Bill Fox" is too large and I would make the color of "Fox" the same as "Bill"

 

My revision:

 

OK, about 2 1/2 hours to go. I really need to see the following changes before declaring a winner:

ruizelfiero: Probably tied as my favorite so far. One typo though. "Vacations" needs an "s" on the end of it and I would like to see it on a white background.

chlopzmazur: Tied for first. I really like the design, but not 100% sure if I'm sold on the color scheme. If you have time, maybe you could play with the use of colors.

If both of these entries can take care of the changes, I can declare a winner.

Thanks!

 

Heres my entry, Easily editable..

 

sorry for the mistake, my corrections here.

 

I will extend the deadline one more day until tomorrow at 5:30 PM This is right at 24 hours from now. My partner is gone for the day and I wish to consult with her before making my final decision. Thank you.

At this point, I would say ruizelfiero is in the lead

 

any feedback for my entry?