Contest Logo for Fitness Product Site [$30]

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Please see attached our concept for entry.
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Bransol

 

Wow I cant upload my entry. =(

 

Thanks for the feedback appreciated, Yes I believe I have won some of the contests held by you.
Here is another concept and revisions are welcome.
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Here is my entry


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Here we go, any edits or additives?

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Hi,
please check my entry
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Hi,
please check my entry
feedback appreciated

thank you

 

Creativerabi - Much nicer as a flat logo, easier to see what's up. With the arrow shape in the M it works okay because it is in the middle. The leaves look okay. Not entirely sure about the gradient effect in the green text and shape, but otherwise, a really nice submission. Your #23 submission isn't as amazing in my opinion. The water drop shape and the squiggles don't really add anything and only serve to muddy up the logo and composition because they look so weak next to the text.

otakatun - I like the updated fire, the off-white and red version looks the best in my opinion. The W looks almost italicized the way it is setup now. Can you try some different fonts?

galalogo - The winged V's look interesting, the darker green and grey looks good. The typography is rough. Still makes me think of some weird protein powder or something. I'm really looking to convey up brand, bold, professional, simple. As for your #20 entry - same problem with the typography. And the leaves over the o to give an apple feel is okay, but not super original. Entry #29 I don't want people to think pills when thinking of the brand, but I appreciate you trying to go in that direction. Entry #30 - I am not sure what to think of this one. The logo is strange as the F really stands out, the typography is weird with the little spikes coming off the letters. I am not a fan but appreciate the creativity.

altruist design - That's a fun concept using a human flexing shape to make you think of a diamond. That's neat. Please drop the .com from the logo. I'd love to see some variations on typography for your entries. I love your #16 entry in terms of the diamond shape, but absolutely cringe ad the text treatment on that one. It would be nice if each side of the diamond shape came in a bit at the top like in your #15 entry to convey the fists a bit more. This is one of my favourite entries.

moborak9s - This would work for protein powder or some multilevel marketing thing, but that's not what I'm trying to convey. The typography isn't premium, business, upscale, though I like the simplicity of just adding in a touch of green to make it stand out.

puttu - The WF of the logo and then the typography, don't feel like they are cohesive or from the same logo. I feel like the K is being squished in the text because it is so narrow compared to the other letters. I like the idea of a hexagon, but beyond that, I'm not feeling the logo.

bransol - The shape in the O is almost lost and just looks like a mistake because it isn't sharp enough to convey what you are hoping for at the size you displayed it at. The typography looks okay, but the offset of the word Formula and making it so very small seems strange to me. Either lining it up with the W or making it centered with some kind of horizontal lines would be ideal. Also, the letter spacing for formula looks a bit tight.

GM8 - This is one of the few WF logos that I think looks cool. I don't know if it feels upmarket enough but overall, I like it. The lines are pretty clean. I worry that the spacing on the F might get lost/muddy if the logo was displayed smaller. The type for Workout and formula looks good. I like the letter spacing, though Formula feels like it goes a bit beyond the width of the word Workout (even if it actually doesn't). Can you also try a touch darker with the green? Nice submission!

Creative_illusion - I'm sorry to hear that. Can you upload elsewhere and link to it?

Logos4all - The last in your chain of submissions where the wings are F's looks the best. The darker green looks good. Can you space out the wings from the middle shape by the distance between the inside of the F so that those distances are the same? It may look better... I'm not certain.

technoguy - I feel like this is a bank logo I've seen somewhere maybe... I get what you are trying to do and it is cool, but I'm concerned it is very similar to logos already being used by big brands. As for your type treatment, I am not a fan of the WM and K characters in the font you used. They look weird to me and don't convey expensive or premium.

kavo0o0o - The F in your logo feels odd to me, the swooping lines and the hard middle part of the F... I think you made that shape yourself, which is really cool, but it just feels off. The typography looks okay, though the LA and UT feel too tightly together. The F and W feel too wide. The gradient for the green isn't necessary. As for your second entry, you went overboard and added so much that it is worse.

scottystart - Very interesting shape you've chosen. Very modern. The type looks great. The colours are good. Not sure about the gradient. The three spikes in the logo at the bottom, as well as the separation of the feathers in the wing, might get lost if the logo is shrunk down. I really like the green at the top of the left-wing on your first logo submission.

getdomain4u - So many horizontal lines! Not sure about the word Workout, but the font for Formula looks good. I like it being in the semi-rounded rectangle. I like the greens you've selected. I like the W as this ribbon design. I don't think that three thin lines coming off it works though. Maybe two thicker ones off each side? Very cool entry though.

 

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Here is another concept


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Thank you for your feedback. Here is the revision.

 

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