logo design for men's lifestyle site $40, 48 hours

thank you for the feedback! changed the design:

i548.photobucket.com/albums/ii333/bellichi/everydayplayer.jpg

 

Power Slave, I like the pencil line figure at the front of the logo. I would like it more recognisable tho. Its hard to tell what it is. You have some great ideas.

-W.K.

 

MantisArt, I'm not a big fan of the gold colour, also I want the name to be the focus with the image being the primary accent. It seems like your design is the opposite. Cool take on the idea tho

-W.K.

 

Renderwork, very professional looking logo, however it strikes me as being more law-firm then men's lifestyle, understand what I mean?
Good luck!

-W.K.

 

Revised entry of a whole suit top, more instantly recognisable. Feedback appreciated again

 

Hi,

Here is my logo:

The second one is an idea of a header that came to me while tweaking the first logo.

 

Feedback appreciated.

 

r3ticul, that looks great. if you want to make revisions go ahead. i don't really have that much criticism on it...

 

bellichi, definitely headed in the right direction. just more many, swank it up and give it some suave. i don't know any other way of explaining it

-W.K.

 

anidesign, the top hats aren't really striking my fancy. cool look, but the guys on the ends just seem too old fashioned.

-W.K.

 

Power Slave, the picture is still comfusing me... it reminds me of a spider though i assume its surposed to be a torso?

-W.K.

 

i'm honestly running out of feedback. the logo's you guys are coming up with are great and at the end of the day we will be desiding on the one we want. good luck, keep them coming!

-W.K.

 

I am not very sure about the font, will revise it later after I get back home

 

my revision, thanks

 

Yo. At least tell me your opinion about my design. Not saying anything, yet leaving feedback for a design entered after mine is a bit rude in my opinion. Come on man, at least say it's not what you are looking for. Just so I don't keep coming back to this thread wondering if I should try something else. Anyway, good luck with this design becuase I like the idea of your site. The niche is a great one and something I would probably visit often if it were updated regularly.

Design withdrawn.

 

moonwalker, i didn't have any feedback for you because i thought your design was good and i didn't have anything that i would have changed. it's too bad that it seems you withdrew your design. i'll have to tell my associates that it is no longer on of the finalists.

thanks for the comment on TheEverydayPlayer.com. we have been going through some redesign thoughts so new content hasn't been added for almost a week.

-W.K.

 

I would definitly stay in if i knew that you thought it was good, but if you don't say anything about and critique other entries after mine I will naturally assume that you guys don't like it. Either way, if you guys make your site relevant to the male psyche and the interest of our minds I will for sure visit your site often becuase I am always looking for something to inspire me.

 

My entry:

 

Thank you for the feedback! I changed it a bit:

i548.photobucket.com/albums/ii333/bellichi/everydayplayer-2.png