Contest Logo contest for logo artists - 40$ for the winner!

HI My 3rd Entry, I hope you will like this, If you need any changes please say



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any comments on my design,,.
if u need any modifications let me know,,.

 

Comments are appreciated

 

Ok, let me see...

Mcillustrator #2
That's much better. Still I'd like to ask you to do something with the "ball". Could you come up with a different drawing?

brainsurgeon
#1: That's better. I like it. Could you find a different font? Less military , more business?
#2: Missed. That's nothing about finance, sorry.

falloutvic
Good idea, thank you. Could add more colors, make it more positive?

digital_iran
Thanks for your entry. The idea with this "half-butterfly" is nice. The "Coach Pro" font should be bolder definitely.
In general it's average. Maybe you should explore the "half-butterfly" idea with a different design (font, colors etc.)?

jardo
Thank you for this good design. I like to font and colors. Could you play a bit with coloring of the "Online Coach Pro" ?
I really like idea of the drawing on the right. Guys, I was thinking about something like that! This indeed is a good direction.
Ok, please explore the idea of this "line art man". A few changes and it could be really great!

Animman
Thanks for your drawing. It remainds me of Green Peace. Good for an eco company, but it's not the case, I'm sorry.

fouzan
Welcome!
#1
As I mentioned above, I like the idea of the "line art man". As for the rest... I guess you use a diffrent technique, because it looks
completely different then the other logos. In my opinion it doesn't suite the needs of a web 2.0 web site.
#2
It's a bit better. Play with the "online coach pro" coloring. I do not get the idea of this drawing on top, it should "say" something.
#3
See my remarks to #2. It's the best of your 3 submissions.

shiuli
Hi, good to have you here. I have to say that I like your entry. The second one is better (I've spent a whole minute to find the difference ).
I really like the "Coach" font, maybe you could change the other font to something else? Could you play with colors a bit and make it more positive?
In general you have a really nice ideas . If you can think about a different one I'd love to see that. Still this one is a good one.

 

To sum up:
It will be a very hard decision to pick up the winner. Thank you for you designs!
Please keep in mind that the drawing should "say" something. It could be symbolic, but it should connect with the people who are watching it.
Please also choose a "business" fonts, not a very fancy ones.
I really like the idea of the "line art man". I've found something more in this style:
(templatemonster)

(I mean just this white line art man symbol).

As for now the entries, which are going in the good direction (in a random order ) :
jardo, shiuli, brainsurgeon #1, falloutvic


Thank you all and waiting for the new revisions!

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puttu
Thank you for your submission. It looks very similar to the brainsurgeon post. The "O" looks like a tyre, coaching is not about cars . Bring some positive enery, colors to your picture, please!

 

here is 2 logos from me,

 

@Sniip3r
Thank you for the logos.
#1 . The legs. Don't look right. The upper part is fine.
#2. Looks better. Could you combine the man from the #1 and #2 somehow ?
I like #1 winning gesture and the #2 dynamic and smooth look. #2's head is a bit too big I guess.
Getting back to the fonts. Why is the "Online" part so big? Being online is not the most important thing. If you want to make one bit bigger it is the coach which matters. I think that all part of the name should stay the same. You can differentiate them using colors.
In general - a good entry.

 

Thank you will post revised version today

 

one more,

 

Puttu please don't copy my concept.

 

A couple of new concepts along with the old one with revised font :

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Feedback appreciated.

 

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Thanks for the helping feedback.
here it is.


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need not to copy your concept....
As CH Mentioned in the brief as "Example keywords, just to get your creativity going: wings, flight, bird, growth, development, human, people, relations, winning, light, sun

(just examples - do not limit your ideas)."

I took wings as my concept and developed the design...

I didnt see your entry as CH mentioned me as comment its like brain surgeon entry i came to know...

I dont want to use your brain... i will use my brain.

Before posting on the thread think it, dont operate with out using your brain