Contest Logo Contest 3 days $ 40 / Slimming

Logo text: SLIMTECH
Logo Tagline: None
Logo Style: Modern, Clean
Logo Color Scheme: Should work on dark and white backgrounds
Logo Shape: Rounded, its about slimming ...

The main key and target is Slimming, Tech is not that important (certainly there is some technology in this use for slimming... but not a specific one)
Main target group is slightly more female, but should also be suiting men

- Needs to be a vector logo, but also as JPG or PNG with around 1.000 and 200 px
- any fonts used need to be included in the source files
- Closing Monday evening 9pm West-European time (But I take the right to prolong)
- Payment via Paypal

 

Many thanks for the first logo. Unfortunately I'm not quite happy yet, and I'd like to give a very precise reason to hopefully make the way a little easier.

Colour scheme:
I would like to doubt that the dark grey parts can be seen well on a black or anthracite background. Mostly the logo will be used on white, but there are situations where there are dark backgrounds or photos with restless backgrounds.
So either the grey part has to become lighter or the whole logo has to be backed up with a colour field.

Font:
The font used looks very angular, there are rounder fonts.
A slightly thinner elegant font makes sense in the context of "slimness".
The part with the "TECH" is made in a less conspicuous color, but the thick character set almost drowned out the left part with the signal color red.
I think it would have been better to use the same font for the right part.

Visual:
Where I can do very little with it is the round logo with the modified Ying-Yang. Yes, with a little love you can interpret a head and a body from the figures, but that requires intellectual activity - and that's deadly for a logo. Then there are two lines on the outside, the whole thing looks playful, but not at all connected with the lettering.

I hope this helps a little ....

 

Many thanks for the new suggestions, which I would like to comment briefly in the following

@fajarfaqih
here, too, there is the problem that TECH is much more visible than SLIM
the logo is also not recognizable for me related to the topic

@divineworld
I like the idea of the oval circle and the body.
I think you could remove the hair, then it would be gender neutral.
due to the monochrome design it looks relatively simple, it doesn't look really "sexy" yet. Maybe silver as a colour, combined with another colour?
perhaps this is also due to the relatively simple design of the lettering

@dikoka
I like the idea of the lettering getting thinner. Fits to the theme
but the font itself is also TECH-heavy and does not correspond to the round body-referred
whether the writing effect is sufficient to design the logo concisely I do not know exactly.

 

Hello,
Please, see my entry attached. ~

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@DianaGy :
- I like the font
- I like the colours although for a final commercial version the lilac maybe a bit too "played" . Could be the pair eg #59a6ff and #ff9959 for example as well. Also maybe better to put the more pronounced darker colour to the word slim and the less pronouced one to tech
- The ideas with the dots becoming smaller is good
- The branding effect could possibly improved, the dots do add some kind of uniqueness to the letters, but the total impression if still focused on the text

 

Thank you for the feedback, you can find my revision below.~

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Hope you like it, Feedback Appreciated

 

Another Entry, Hope you like it