Logo Contest | 3 days | $25 | Detailed Feedback Given!!!

Vebtools, yes, there are a few birds floating about rolleyes:) in this contest, but they're slightly more subtle than yours. The second one wasn't too much like the twitter logo, I just don't think it would have matched with my site. You're obviously very creative, so I'm looking forward to your next entry. My one bit of advice would be to try and steer away from birds, think more generic.

Deception, sorry, no where near what I want. Needs a transparent background for a start, also I prefer the cartoon style ones.

 

Tightwad, I actually meant blue, but that still looks quite good lol. Could you try it in a light blue so I know what it looks like? Other than that, really liking it

 

Renderwork, really nice design work, but I'm not really into it. Took me a while to figure out which direction it was pointing in, and even then I'm not keen on the bow or eyelashes, too feminine. If you can make it a bit less fat and a bit more neutral, that'd be great. Also, I'd prefer a sharper font.

 

kk.. I LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK, first person on DP to do it that well, I am currently sick, at work, and am not going to log onto my laptop at some for atleast 24 hrs, so if it is open until then.. You will here from me.. (unless I make a recovery)

 

Tightwad, a lot better, thanks. The little bubble shaped thing behind the bird, could you make that a bit darker so it blends in a bit more please? I know what you're trying to do, and it looks good, just a bit too bright. Alternatively (probably a better idea), could you make the bird a bit darker and leave the rest of the design the same?

BoGFX. Hi. I try to do good feedback because I know how frustrating it is for designers when they spend ages on a design and then the CH doesn't even show the courtesy to take a few minutes to reply, and it seems to keep the designers happy when I leave good feedback, hence 4 pages of brilliant entries!

BTW, I hope you get better and I hope you have time to enter. I'm leaving this contest open for 72 hours after the thread was started, as this was my promise and it'd be unfair to change that for 1 person after everyone has spent so much time getting an early entry in.

 

Renderwork, much better indeed. Going to be a VERY tough decision at the end of these 3 days lol Regarding the design, could you clean up the edge at the back of the neck please? Not smooth. Also, I think the bottom half of the bird is a bit too dark, so if you could lighten that up (just a bit) it'd be good.

 

I personally like the purple myself...

 

Guys, thanks for the revisions. I'm just about to go to bed, so I'll provide feedback in the morning.

 

TightWad, another great entry. Now I look at it more, I realise the bird looks pretty feminine. Could you try and make this more neutral please? Other than that it's awesome.

Renderwork, awesome stuff. I love the entry, but I can't help feeling that the circle with the bird in looks a bit empty. Could you try adding some small variations to that part of it? Also, I think you made the bottom half too light now Could you try it in the middle of the other entry and your latest?

Dimitri, very nice work. I do like the orange one the most, so if we could stick with that one for future revisions it'd be great Could you do something with the eye? I feel just a white spot isn't really enough... try adding a pupil or whatever it's called ... the blue bit basically.

Thanks again for all the entries guys, this is going to be such a tough decision!

 

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