Hi Massi - thanks for the entry. I can't give you specific ways to improve it but the overall quality is rough and pixelated, sorry
Thanks for the submissions, I honestly thought that I wouldn't receive original entries after the early ones breaching copyright, so thank you! frikusha - nice work... but the second image is a dead link? evo - A very interesting stylised look! I will ask the client, this might be a direction she wants to go! Animman - I will certainly use you when I need a professional yet fun logo for a client! Seriously it's good work but you have created fun and bright when she wants classy elegance (good font choice compared to before ) Massi - you are getting closer but the overall quality is still pixelated, sorry akhilrs - Thanks for an original submission! It's interesting but I think the art and the writing need to feel like they belong together
The customer has chosen.... drumroll please akhilrs - congratulations I would like to say that Massi - your last one only lost on the font and clarity My personal choice was frikusha Thank you to EVERYONE who submitted. I will be looking forward to working with all of you in the future!