Launch in days, Need some reviews/testimonials for my new SEO software

Hi,

I am launching a new SEO Software product to monitor Google, Yahoo and Bing SERPS Ranking for websites. I need 10 members with SEO background to try the software and give me their testimonial about it, in return I am willing to give them:

• Full version of the software for free
• Their testimonial + link to their website on my sales page

the sales page is here for more details on the product.
http://theserpsmonitor.com/

only 10 are required, Video Testimonial will be a plus.

 

The landing page has a lot of work to be done. It is far from ready and far from good. Focus your efforts on fixing the page before you ask other people to do something for you.

 

your comment is very general, can you give some more specific hint?
I know it's incomplete and I am working on it, one of the things I need is testimonials and people to test the product don't you agree?

btw: for menu links like
download & upgrade they are already finished, I just removed them coz I don't want people to be directed to clickbank test payment page

 

I currently work as an SEO manager so would love to give you a review.

PM me if you are still looking!

 

Sorry to say but the sales page is poor, you need to do some good tweaking, at least in graphics terms.

 

what do u think of BMDs' page is it good? in your opinion
http://bookmarkingdemon.com/

 

This is a typical CB site, combination of colors is good but personally I will prefer some more vivid and contemporary style. These kind of products are sold mostly to affiliates and I would say that you would not care that much about the design but it should be decent at least.
Like the example page you provided.

I would suggest keep it simple and nice but not too simple

 

The sales page is not complete, I might change the whole design.
I think this thread is misunderstood, what I want is some people to test the software and give me testimonial to include on that page, however what I am getting are reviews
about my website design.

Anyone interested please PM me

 

Regardless of how good is the software or not, you first need to have a good eye-catching design and sales letter if you want to sell it.
Most CB products are lower quality compared to their web pages

 

Your landing page is so 1999

 

You shouldn't use a lot of red color. It makes your website cheesy, especially this image:
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What I don't like is the font of "Monitor all your websites ranking"

 

I agree I think your landing page needs A LOT of work to be done on it. Just take a look at your competition, I can guarantee you they have put in more effort than what has gone into your website. You need more eye catching graphics and a compelling story that convinces the reader your product is worthy.

 

I have some experience in SEO. I can do this for you.

 

Great share. Checking out the site now. Any pre-launch prizes available?

 

the zip file is not found on server ???

 

Ok, I changed the design, please check

PS: I am not yet done

 

I like it. Nice work.

 

I will test out the software and give you my honest testimonial about it.

Long standing member of DP, high posts/rep and will be setting up a lot of new clickbank based websites over the summer (as usual) so if it is good I will happily promote your product(s).

Though I can not say I like your landing page... the white and grey text looks very boring. This is additionally the case when you then justify all the text, sometimes center or no alignment looks good.

Also try colours, underlines and bold...

The video is good, though maybe try and re do your audio (in bits rather than in one go and then paste it together) in order to remove all your errs, emms and speech corrections. It just sounds more professional... perhaps also try and add emphasis on your video rathar than monotone.

Regards,
Tyrone Campbell

 

Thank you, I am looking forward to get your testimonial. I have improved the page a little now, and certainly will make more adjustments, The amount of work is huge that's the problem.