Landing Page... Too simple?

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by GreenDog, Jun 15, 2008.

  1. #1
    Will you experts take a look at my landing page and tell me if its too simple.

    http://dogesite.com
     
    GreenDog, Jun 15, 2008 IP
  2. blackscorpion

    blackscorpion Active Member

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    I am no expert but I like it because its simple and my eyes immediately went to your headline which tells me to view a video; so it got my attention and curiosity and thats good . :)
     
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  3. NCMedia

    NCMedia Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Heya,

    1. GET RID OF ADSENSE - NOW - You're passing off you prospects for pennies - instead get a dog banner asap.

    2. There is very little call to action - i think you should have a BIG button/links i.e. [​IMG]

    3. Perhaps add another horizontal banner in the footer.

    Looks good overall - best of luck with it!
    N.
     
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  4. ExpertForumGuy

    ExpertForumGuy Well-Known Member

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    That page, my friend, can make you a crazy amount of money.
     
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  5. Goodfellas

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    #5
    I think it needs a little more landing page content...

    All I see is a video, 4-5 bullet points and an ebook cover...

    Try adding something like 300-400 words worth of unique and useful content within the niche.

    The design and layout seems simple and perhaps quite effective! Good luck..
     
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  6. emon878

    emon878 Active Member

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    #6
    I like it nice and simple however some nice big call to action buttons could
    help as NcMedia mentioned above.

    A member here at DP is offering everyone some
    FREE Web 2.0 you could use many of these buttons on your landing page check out
    his thread: http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=884930
     
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  7. Belome

    Belome Peon

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    It's actually very nice. I like how simple the design is, with some PPC you will probably seen some good results. However, I definitely think you should cloak your affiliate link.
     
    Belome, Jun 15, 2008 IP
  8. bunch

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    I love your website I am quite amazed thank you for sharing and I hope you have great success!!
     
    bunch, Jun 15, 2008 IP
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    #9
    Hey,

    add some quality content and a call to action ... overall, looks pretty damn good ;)
     
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    C.Whyte Peon

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    #10
    It's pretty clean. The adsense should definitely go (if it has not already been removed). Going with what madmik85 said, the more content you can put on the better!
     
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  11. lemonarian

    lemonarian Peon

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    Dude, that lander is supposed to be targeting ONE product, right?

    Well, you have like 50 affiliate links there too. Not a good idea.

    So, no it's not too simple, rather too advanced I'd say, get rid of the links.
     
    lemonarian, Jun 15, 2008 IP
  12. emon878

    emon878 Active Member

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    But all the links are very relevant someone that comes to that website
    might be interested in some of those things. And he did the links in
    such a way that it doesn't take away from the rest of the page.
     
    emon878, Jun 15, 2008 IP
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    As the guys said before, get a download .jpg and cloak your affiliate link with url forwarding, will help you convert.
     
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  14. lemonarian

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    #14
    You do have a point there.

    I know, test!
    First, send traffic to the page as it is... see how much you make...

    get rid of 'em... send some more traffic... see if you sell more, or less. Will be a valuable lesson to know in the future too.

    Good luck!

     
    lemonarian, Jun 15, 2008 IP