I am looking to improve my landing page: http://articleanswer.com/weight_loss_secret.html can someone give me some suggestion to improve the conversion for this landing page? thanks
I think its a good start--the eye path is a straight line down. I would add a border around the content. I would use fewer words and possible highlight a phrase or two in large text to catch the users attention. I would also add more bulleted text to break it up. Finally, add a compelling call to action to get users to sign up and move the sign up fields higher up on the page to attract more attention.
I tend to copy the markerters- armand morrins design type here: http://www.seotraininglive.com/adwords/seotraining1.htm Google adwords saying 70% conversion to lead...probaly lower... I would make it more obivious what you are giving maybe?
That page is gross, can it. I dont' want to see pics like that and if I'm grossed out there's no way I'm staying on the page. Mimic the merchants as much as possible, but keep the gore off.
Opps- wrong link- thats an old one - but still apply as the user donest need to scroll also this one: http://www.seotraininglive.com/adwords1/seo-tips.htm
I would suggest removing pictures from top and using bulleted points that can show the benefits of the product in just one glance. Also highlighting your call-to-action button with some other text like "Make Me Slim" can help. Just my 2 cents!
hey guys, i followed the suggestions in DP and here is landing page: http://www.miscellaneousinformation.com/test2.html how do you guys think? again all suggestions are appreciated. I need to improve this page (grammar, graphic, etc). thanks for all suggestions guys.
The page needs some more variety. The colors are dull and disinviting. I would can the 2nd 1/2 of those bullets and have less text overall. A lot of your text is filler and some of it is downright morbid and will not be beneficial to the click. Get rid of any negative anything in this LP...that means the 2nd 1/2 of the bullets. Rework your design and give it a better feng shui. Make it seem more important. You have a very short amount of time to grab the visitor's attention. Make the CTA more inviting and more IMPORTANT! That little tiny button is afraid to be clicked You want to make people feel good that they're giving up their email to find out this magic secret, not remind them that it doesn't have the same side effects as Prozac. I'm not making this an advertisement for me, but I do design Lps...so if you want to check out some of my samples to give you a better idea of what i'm talking about, check out the link below. Best luck! Hope i've helped a little. http://www.michaelbonadio.com/portfolio/
The "opinions" offered in this thread while all good willed are almost completely useless and opinion based. You need to let your visitors/customers decide how the site should look. You need to split test and MV test to find out exactly what it SHOULD look like.
it's not bad, but the layout might be wrong I would put the email box centered and below some text, the user must read something, be convinced and will enter his email, this way he has to go down and up at the end maybe it's just a minor tweak, but I'd do it