My company sells Insurance Continuing Education. I will be marketing this page via an email. The old page is here - https://www.internetce.com/states/Maryland.aspx The revised page is here - https://www.internetce.com/states/MarylandTest.aspx I have some ideas to start, but before I taint your good thoughts, could you please give me advice: What do you understand the page to be about as soon as you land? Whats the first thing you see? How would you change it if you were king? Many, many thanks!
Hi adell, I understand you want us to comment on the test (new) page so here is my opinion: Site is VERY unclear to me - might be that I'm not from the US but it seems to be something with insurance and education. But no clue. I looked at the affordable, convenient, expert" area first but that does not mean anything to me. I mean pretty much all services could advertise that way. Why don't you start out with a BIG benefit statement. "If you want X this is going to be the most important site you will ever find. Here is why..."
Cool design and color schemes and it was fast in loading too.The contents are interesting and informative too..
@ MoritzB - Thanks for the feedback. It really helps. It seems that most of the feedback ive gotten is centered around lack of clarity of message...i think part of that will come in the next phase....thanks again! @ netdriver788 - Thanks
Use a headline that grabs visiors attention. Need keywords in code for SEO Use bigger font for text and icons next to bullet points so they stand out
@gladiatort - thanks @MMullen - thanks for the tips..curious, what icons and text are you speaking of?