Landing Page - Need your opinion

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by Devour, Nov 25, 2007.

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    I have created a new landing page for adwords. You can see it here. This is my first time when i create a landing page. Please tell me is it ok? Or what should i change?

    PS: Should i use my own domain?
     
    Devour, Nov 25, 2007 IP
  2. blowingideas

    blowingideas Peon

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    Page Cannot Be Found!!

    web server isn't accepting connection through port 80. seems like your server is down. :D
     
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  3. alexs464

    alexs464 Well-Known Member

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    It looks nice, the 2.0 style :)

    But what bout your header: " Lear ho wo play the guitar" ...???
     
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    trigman Active Member

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    It's very nice beside you got couple of spelling mistakes in header just fix those & good luck with it :)
     
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  5. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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  6. infogle

    infogle Prominent Member

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    Nice try... not compulsory you can continue using the current domain you have configured in...
     
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    markov Peon

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    The header shows "Lear ho wo play the guitar
    The best guitar training systems available "

    correct the spelling mistakes.
     
    markov, Nov 26, 2007 IP
  8. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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    Ok i have corrected all my mistakes. Now i am creating a new adwords account to test it. Will try keywords such as "guitar lessons online", "beginner guitar book", "easy/fast guitar lessons" etc
     
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    hanleo46 Guest

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    Title is still mispelled Devour///

    Should read learn NOT lear
     
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  10. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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    Thank you for help. I have corected all my title mistakes =)
     
    Devour, Nov 26, 2007 IP
  11. blowingideas

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    now it's up. nice site dude, pretty cool.

    why don't you add a subscription page for the visitors of your site? that's one way of building your list. :D
     
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  12. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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    Is there any free tools like awever available? I do not want to invest more money yet.
     
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  13. Telmari

    Telmari Active Member

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    #13
    That landing page looks pretty good!

    One thing however is that you might want to unify exactly what the page is about...

    ..for instance, you have "Learn how to play the guitar", "Guitar courses", and "Guitar lessons reviews"... I'd try to unify all of those to one main heading - not only will it help with adwords relevancy for your CPC costs, but it will better connect with the user in terms of getting exactly what they're looking for.

    Also, you may benefit from having all 3 of the products side-by-side, or making each product so people don't have to scroll down as far to see each one & easily compare them side-by-side - one thing about the internet, more or less, people are always in a hurry to do/see/read more in less time :)

    -T
     
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    Looks nice... have you had time to test it yet? I'd certainly be interested in hearing the results.
     
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  15. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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    Yes, i have tested it already. CTR: 0,5%, 14 clicks per 7 hours. 9 CB Hops. No sales. One submission to my mail list. I decided to give it a try and registered a free account. I think it worth investing money in aweber so i will buy it today. By the way: can i use both content and search networks in adwords at the same time?
     
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  16. peegs_dad

    peegs_dad Banned

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    Nice page there - interesting stuff
     
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  17. Devour

    Devour Active Member

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    I have also added aweber subscribe form to the page. Already have 2 subscribers. Today i am going to take keywords with good CTR and create a new campaign with this keywords.
     
    Devour, Nov 28, 2007 IP
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    Looks great!
     
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    killafawk Active Member

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    Honestly i think you should get rid of the stuff above the grey part, instead keep it simple white page with the products side by side and at the top put something like

    "More Bang for Your Buck, Guitar Products that Deliver on What They Promise!"

    in big letters and then show your products. My first impression going to the site was what is this site for and the lettering was way to small to catch my attention. I wanted to leave immediately. Its up to you but I feel you need to simplify it more and take some of the coloring off, maybe even that black bar on the top.

    Also the product images look horrible. They need to be resized or something because they don't look right.

    good luck
     
    killafawk, Nov 28, 2007 IP