Landing Page Critique?

I am trying to market a micro niche product that is highly targeted to a site that I run. I am looking for some critiques on my landing page and ideas from some to let me know what you think could help this page convert.

I look forward to your responses!

Hikari Shrimp Cuisine
(note the shamless backlink above!)

 

It looks a little too busy and cluttered for a landing page. Try to streamline it a little bit and make it easier for someone to buy. Less confusion

 

I would agree, the less cluttered a landing page is the more likely you can get a visitor to go where you want them to.

 

the key is less clutteredness in landing page . Try using simple graphics

 

u need to review competitior website for same so u get better idea about that

 

is that true ? How can a users upload unlimited photos in their profiles. Don't they have a limit on space or something.

 

The landing page should include exact matching content referring the anchor text, a guide, or report loaded with valuable information rather than a shopping cart.

 

Nice color scheme, it is a quality landing page.

 

i think it looks good. one thing that was hard to see was the email sign up.

 

Hi Dan. The way it's written, I think it would be better if you list the benefits down instead so that potential buyers can read them easily.

You could also rewrite this part: "Hikari specially designed the world's smallest wafer food for all size shrimp species," into something like: "Hikari specially designed the world's smallest wafer food for shrimp of all size and species."

I hope that helps.