Landing page! check it please!

Discussion in 'Affiliate Programs' started by untouchable90, Jan 31, 2008.

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    check out my first landing page....

    www.buildurbody.com/bodybuilding.php

    I havent even put up the buy button cos im writing the ebook so this way i rule out all affiliate programs! and i can set my own price but i do affiliate using CJ to sell supplements, in the ebook though i go on about vital supplements and link them so they can buy through me... i also have adverts which are great! Once its done im going to use PPC to increase traffic and see if i can achieve a decent ROI and every penny i make will go into my site such as more content and more PPC!

    all critique accepted...
     
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  2. untouchable90

    untouchable90 Peon

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    any ideas guys?
     
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    Hm. I'm not in this business, but just an advice. Do not use adsense if you're using adwords to advertise.
    Google may thinkg you wanna do arbitrage.
    Anyway, a big buy now button is a great point.
     
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    For sure remove that Adsense ads if you are using adwords or any other cpc program to promote your site , as it only fucks up design+ there is some chance that visitor get interest in that ad and he leaves your site and don't buy your product!
     
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    Tom Thumb Notable Member

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    Agree with all above . Remove adsense. You never see it on a landing page...
     
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    it was only there while i made the ebook cos i had traffic on the page so thought meh might as well make a few $$ from it? ill remove it as soon as the ebook is done and i make my first sale... anything else?
     
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    experienceadvertising Peon Affiliate Manager

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    I would suggest a redesign to look more like a high-end bodybuilding or supplement website. I think your site looks too much like a blog and it need to convey trust and security to convince people to buy products from you. You may want to also consider giving away a free chapter of the ebook to get them to give you their email address and then upsell them the rest of the ebook...
     
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