Landing Page Advice

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by djmizticnz, Jan 18, 2008.

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    Hi All,

    I've been a longtime lurker on DP, and just today registered to get some advice for my landing page.

    The url is: http://www.3-red-light-fix-review.info

    Any help is greatly appreciated, thanks.

    Luke
     
    djmizticnz, Jan 18, 2008 IP
  2. immiseo

    immiseo Peon

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    Here are my observations for this landing page:

    Overall Presentation is Good.

    Changes Suggested:

    Place "Click Here To Secure Your Copy Today!"... Below The Book Image and move the "Disclaimer- Please Read Now" Towards Right.

    Move "3 Red Lights" image to the left and place its description in the right side.

    From here onwards you can follow your current zig-zag method.

    Image - Text
    Text - Image
    Image - Text
    Text - Image
    Image - Text


    "Click Here To Secure Your Copy Today!"

    Place this text in an attractive image with strong "call to action" word/phrase.


    In the End...Place Your CheckOut Options/Payment Methods.


    If you like above suggestion...rep appreciated.
     
    immiseo, Jan 18, 2008 IP
  3. jj407

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    I would break up those bubbles a bit more. To me, the text in the bubbles is harder to read than normal Black on white text. I would put more normal text in between the bubbles and maybe use less bubbles.

    I would also move the CLICK HERE TO ORDER link to be centered ABOVE the last bubble, and then use the last bubble to give some kind of "this is why you should get it right away" type message.

    Those are my thoughts...however, I am definitely no expert...still learning myself with my own product that I just launched a few days ago. (see sig)
     
    jj407, Jan 18, 2008 IP
  4. JohnS0N

    JohnS0N Notable Member

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  5. djmizticnz

    djmizticnz Peon

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    Thank you for that advice, greatly appreciated.

    I have used your advice on my page now, as well as adding a few other lil things like blue hyperlinks etc.
     
    djmizticnz, Jan 20, 2008 IP
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    I just wanted to add, next time, try to pick a domain name with less hyphen and easier to remember.

    Just my thoughts.
     
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    exolis Well-Known Member

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    I agree, something shorter is much easier for visitors to remember and of course, a .com extension is the preferred choice for a domain.

    My 2 cents... :)
     
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    Swerd Active Member

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    why the disclaimer?

    I think you would be scaring away some people
     
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    I loved the top of the page but stopped looking the moment I saw the mid and bottom sections of it. Those are way too busy and you have to make an effort to read the text.

    Also, why did you pick a domain with so many dashes in it? :)

    The page you created is a so called "thin" landing page. The days of "thin" landing pages are long gone. Now you have to create landing web sites if you want to make sales. This page will never rank high in SEs and it is not well optimized to make the best out of the PPC traffic either.
     
    baumann93, Jan 20, 2008 IP