KwlGaming Community Review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by simdol, Jul 23, 2013.

  1. #1
    Hello there,

    We've just finished creating our forum called, "KwlGaming Community"
    In here, you can discuss anything within rules + sell licenses or trade anything you've got!

    First, I need review of following things

    - Performance
    - Any grammar typos?
    - And bugs you've found?
    - Forum quality
    - Forum security

    We've just launched this community; might be really buggy.

    If you can, please register on our community!
    Always registration is appreciated!

    Url: www.kwlgaming.com
     
    simdol, Jul 23, 2013 IP
  2. qwikad.com

    qwikad.com Illustrious Member Affiliate Manager

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    #2
    I am getting this message while trying to access your forum:

    Fetching of original content failed with the following error: Proxy Publisher Failure - CONNECTION ERROR. If you own this domain, please consult this FAQ.

    Maybe it's just a temporary glitch.
     
    qwikad.com, Jul 23, 2013 IP
  3. simdol

    simdol Greenhorn

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    #3
    Sorry, we had few down time due to maintenance.
    Thank you for letting us know!
    Feel free to register =)
     
    simdol, Jul 24, 2013 IP
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    simdol Greenhorn

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    #4
    Update:

    - New theme
    - Increased our performance
    - Increased our security
     
    simdol, Jul 24, 2013 IP
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    simdol Greenhorn

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    #5
    Site maintenance finished,
    Added following

    - Automated Shop
    - Calender
    - ChatBox (Planned)
     
    simdol, Jul 25, 2013 IP
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    simdol Greenhorn

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    #6
    Still looking for some reviews.
    Please rate and give us reviews =)
     
    simdol, Jul 27, 2013 IP
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    simdol Greenhorn

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    #7
    Edited our theme a bit.
    Also, worked on performance!
     
    simdol, Aug 23, 2013 IP
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    TedMaster Member

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    While I like the theme in general I think it may be a little too bright. I do feel like my eyes are fully relaxed.
    Especially the sub-title of the forum sections are very bright. I'd also consider making the post text itself a tad darker.
    Also the bright blue under the poster avatar is not very pleasant to look at.

    A few wording/grammar issues:
    "Our forum can't maintain without you! Feel free to post anything you wish!". Consider rewording as maintain may not be the best word to use. I'd rather write "Our forum needs you! Feel free to post anything you wish!"
    "Feel free to discuss about StarCraft here! We got them covered!". I'm unsure what you want to say by "We got them covered!". Consider rewording.
    "The World of WarCraft is most famous adventure game out there! Wana discuss about them?" Firstly, I'd consider removing the first "The" to only write "World of warcraft". Instead inset a "The" after "is" and before "most", as this is missing. Secondly, "wana" is spelled "wanna", which is not proper grammar but used as slang online, so should be ok to use. Thirdly "them" is not the right word to use here. I'd consider writing "Wanna discuss this fabulous game?".

    There are more spelling grammar mistakes in the sub-titles. If I were you I'd consider hiring a proof writer before going live with the forum. fiverr.com if your on a tight budget or odesk.com if you want it higher quality work done. I've used odesk.com for proof writing before, works well as you can actually monitor the work done.
     
    TedMaster, Aug 24, 2013 IP