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Kindly review my Mascots

Discussion in 'Design' started by krisdude, Sep 22, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hello,

    These are mascots that I have made recently. I need your sincere :D(I can handle criticism) reviews regarding it and know what you think about it.

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    Thanks,
    Kris
     
    krisdude, Sep 22, 2012 IP
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    I think they look really nice, good job!
     
    IM Nick, Sep 22, 2012 IP
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    they are really good .. i really loved your designs .. :) keep it up .. share some more
     
    dhussey111, Sep 22, 2012 IP
  4. krisdude

    krisdude Well-Known Member

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    Thanks guys for the positive comments. I don't have any more recent ones.
     
    krisdude, Sep 22, 2012 IP
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    Zoti Media Group Notable Member

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    #5
    Great job man. What about to design a logo for me? msg me the price.
     
    Zoti Media Group, Sep 22, 2012 IP
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    Sharpay Active Member

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    I really enjoy the coloring. Very web 2.0 and very sleek and nice.The larger "Gold Biscuits" logo is better. The character looks strange with his 2nd eye not showing. I know his hair is covering it, but it still looks a little off to me.The resume banner is great. Love the character, he looks amazing. The red square with "resumes" written on it looks awkward and flat in comparison to him, however. Try to make that a bit more 3D. On top of that, the English is awkward. Try making the text justified as well. Maybe something like "Get noticed and find a better job. Your resume will be sent to more than 60 job search websites. Don't delay; act now to increase the visibility of your resume to get the best job!" and then a link to the list of sites you mentioned.
     
    Sharpay, Sep 22, 2012 IP
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    #7
    Amazing work your design looking to much nice.:)
     
    jhon prince, Sep 24, 2012 IP
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    krisdude Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. Have sent you a PM please check.


    Hey, thanks for the great review, very constructive. I'm glad the colouring looks fine because that was the most tedious part in terms of practice. I agree about the square resume, next time will show it like a folder which can be recognised and looks more real. Also, will take care to make the mascots more realistic in terms of details, like you have mentioned about the eyes. As for the text, it's upto the client what is written(& whether he's a master of grammar :D) but yes we did remove the 'refer this list' from the paragraph to make it look more natural. Thanks this was helpful.

    Thanks mate!

    Thanks!
     
    krisdude, Sep 24, 2012 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    great work.....
     
    Irfi0009, Sep 24, 2012 IP
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    they are nice
     
    satish68, Sep 25, 2012 IP
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    GMF Well-Known Member

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    #11
    OK, lets get started.


    The first one looks like a Cyclops. I know that the hair is supposed to cover his eye, but it is too small to do that. So just draw a second eye and put the hair over it (I think you know how to do that, right?)

    Second one: My GOD these feet. Has the guyelephantiasis?

    Third: LOL, babies first robot. Also the hands .... are they made out of spatulas?

    Last: The guy looks like he has down syndrome. Change the face a bit and it should look nice
     
    GMF, Sep 25, 2012 IP
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    #12
    It's your "signature", and it looks like good, you should keep the first one with 2 eyes instead of one, otherwise its your style and it's well designed.
     
    RoundShots, Sep 25, 2012 IP
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    krisdude Well-Known Member

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    Well this one seems like a pretty great review:mad::cool: I agree about the hair. As for the 2nd one, it is actually intentional to give it an exaggerated and comical look. For the 3rd one, I definitely need to practice a lot more on robots. Thanks for pointing out the 4th one, now I know where I need to improve. Thanks for the sarcastic and straightforward comment lol:D but I appreciate it, thanks.

    Thanks for the other comments also.
     
    krisdude, Sep 27, 2012 IP
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    Awesome work man.

    Maybe try making the edges a little harder.. Just my humble opinion.
     
    tradedemon, Oct 2, 2012 IP
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    Those are pretty cool actually.
     
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #16
    Nice Logo /. i like ur web page
     
    Irfi0009, Oct 2, 2012 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    Yes Sir Nice Your Web Site
     
    Irfi0009, Oct 3, 2012 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    very good logo i like it
     
    Irfi0009, Oct 5, 2012 IP
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    done one for me,looks really cool!
    thanks,A+
     
    bosanci28, Nov 14, 2012 IP