kindly review my landing page

Hi,

just made a landing page of Call of Duty Black Ops for this Christmass

what do you think so far?

call of duty black ops

 

Try to give link from the body of the text. Also use an image and give link to it as well. I think text links will work better than those amazon banners.

 

It's good but you could put banners to target US visitors.

 

Get rid of the youtube video and replace it with the same video hosted on your server.

If you keep the Youtube embeded code you can loose visitors that go to youtube and from there they find other sites related to Call of Duty Black Ops.

 

very good point.
unlimited space/bandwidth web hosting are cheap these day. I see no problem hosted videos on our website.

 

Nice landing page.

 

Very good effort!

I see how you can easily repeat this for any product.
I like the stationary background - it gives it an edge over the site.

 

I like your background -- the image is so cool. I don't like those buy buttons which look so pushy.

 

You should just re-up those videos to your own youtube account and get a bonus links from this reputable website. Plus, don't underestimate how nicely Youtube videos can rank on their own for long tail keyphrases and bring in extra traffic, if you know how to optimize the video submission.