Kindly review my Corporate websites

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    jimroddy, Jun 26, 2024 IP
  2. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I just looked at the first site and a couple of things stood out
    This is the main information above the fold and it tells me nothing. There are grammar issues but that's nothing compared to not telling your potential customer what you are selling.
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    Use a free tool like Grammarly to get suggestions.

    Eventually, I'll find that it's e-commerce but selling is just a tiny part of that. Does it coordinate with drop shippers? Is there a warehousing component? Not my field but usually the admin requirements are more significant that can I add goods to a cart and pay for them.

    You have 2 product panels that look identical apart from the colour. I get why you use the box but that's outdated and poorly implemented. There are apps to create dummy boxes that look real. Mostly you need to make it clearer that "one is out of the box" and the other one comes with customisations. If people have to read something a couple of times to understand your carefully presented message they're not going to be confident about dealing with the people behind the site.

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    Further down you have this graphic which is so fuzzy it detracts from the message
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    jimroddy Well-Known Member

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    THnaks man, Ill update on it
     
    jimroddy, Jun 27, 2024 IP
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    jimroddy Well-Known Member

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    zaidzahid Active Member

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    i don't know these all linked website is your progress but these are really good and show your effort i think if you combine (https://daani.it/be-seller.html,https://daaniitsolution.com/,https://mlm-software.us/)
    i believe after that your site look very good i opened all these link and in every link your website look very good.
     
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    jimroddy Well-Known Member

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    Thanks mate
     
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    jimroddy Well-Known Member

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    from all these links only this linked (https://daani.it/be-seller.html) website is good so,i advise you to work on this linked website header.
     
    zaidzahid, Jul 27, 2024 IP