Hi, Fellow, DP Members, I had started a blog with the help of blogger and also written few articles. I would like to invite you all to please review my blog http://webtechforyou.blogspot.in/ and through your suggestion or feedback.
Hi Just had a look at your blog and here is my feedback. It's good that you have articles on different topics. The main advice I would give you is to make your articles easy to read. For example, the first few lines of your money making article were a little hard to read, some times it is better to use less formal English because it's easy and fast for the reader. May be you could ask someone to read your text out aloud before you publish it, this may help you to make it less formal and easy to read. I hope you keep up the good work with your site. Hope the feed back was of some use to you. Many thanks David
Had a quick look: First two articles read like they're spun (badly). The tech ones are copies of posts from Webtalkerz (presumably yours). The layout is obviously an attempt to earn money (i.e. far too many ads splattered all over the place - I count six on the first page alone) rather than provide useful content. You may need to rethink your strategy.
I agree with the comments above. Tone down the ads and focus on making the articles read better. Also there are millions of blogger themes. You should look into a nice theme/template to spruce up the blog? Pm me if you want some help finding a theme
Hi, Guys! Thank you all for throwing your views and suggestions about my blog. I have recently change my blog design and made some modifications. I request you all to please have a look.