Hey guys, Designing this for someone and wondering what you thought. It's only a one pager, but does it look professional enough? Note: Just hosting it on this domain temporarily for now. http://www.afreetrip.com Rate: - the color scheme - the presentation Thanks!
Text nice and easy to read but its kinda squashed together. I'm also feeling lost without a header/footer, I feel like I'm missing out on something or it hasnt finished loading. A picture of a nice, suit wearing, hot, office secretary talking on her phone, woman always makes you look more proffesional too And do you have a logo or something to identify you with?
- the color scheme = Not attractive , i think it will be better if you use a dark colour for font - the presentation = You need to work on it, If you are forcing some one for signup you need to tell him lot's of things before he finally decide to signup with you , he will not signup unless he see something new or attractive for doing this My 2 cents
My initial thoughts: Page design looks very professional. It doesn't seem like it was just thrown together overnight. However, I also have no idea what you're selling (other than the obvious) nor does it make me want to sign up. You need a sales/advertisement page that leads to this that has all information pertaining to what you are selling. This gives the viewer the opportunity to decide if he/she wants to sign up for whatever you are selling before they get to the actual signup page. just my $0.02