Just made a small 5 page site love a review thank you!

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    Just recently made the site:

    www.stopearlyejaculation.com in order to sell a low grav clickbank product, (figure id go with low grav thus low competition.

    Just wanted to know what you thought

    thank you for your time
     
    Legendary11, Jun 24, 2009 IP
  2. bus888

    bus888 Banned

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    #2
    thank you
    i like your design themes :) very cool
     
    bus888, Jun 24, 2009 IP
  3. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice topic. Try to trim the spaces at the top and bottom of the site, looks good..
     
    2advance, Jun 25, 2009 IP
  4. stephen082

    stephen082 Active Member

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    Nice landing page, but from my experience of affiliate marketing I want to suggest some points:

    • Add some images related to your topic on page. I am not saying to add some images that looks porno, but something that will represent the grief of men due to premature ejaculation :rolleyes:. This will effect the mind of your targeted visitors.
    • You are using same line "Click here to skip introduction" over and over again. Use some different call to action taglines that may prompt visitor to click on the link.
     
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    Footer text gets cut off a little early using Firefox.
     
    camp185, Jun 25, 2009 IP
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    eTouch123 Guest

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    Nice and simple layout

    Good luck!
     
    eTouch123, Jun 25, 2009 IP
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    #7
    great niche, a little plain though
     
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    #8
    it is plain some pics will be good
     
    FREEMONEY541, Jun 25, 2009 IP
  9. Legendary11

    Legendary11 Well-Known Member

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    What type of pics? hows the content thinks its inviting enough not to turn away visitors?
     
    Legendary11, Jun 25, 2009 IP
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    Nice and simple layout
     
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  11. Legendary11

    Legendary11 Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Thank you all, added a sidebar image instead of the advertisements, changed the header and changed the call to action text lines.

    Improvement? or did you like it the way before? any and al advice is apreciated
     
    Legendary11, Jun 25, 2009 IP