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Judge my Art Work

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by digitalphantom05, Dec 25, 2008.

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    Hello there guys! Have a Merry Christmas :D

    Please judge my artwork. Its a perfume bottle. :p

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    Thank You!
     
    digitalphantom05, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  2. sakto

    sakto Active Member

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    #2
    It looks good but still lacks something, imho.
     
    sakto, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    it doesnt look that comnvincing seeing as the lid would never come off. lol it's a funnel. also, make the star black insted.

    idk, my 2cents
     
    laxj11, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    chitranshj Banned

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    Super Kijji
     
    chitranshj, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    #5
    It looks very good to me, good job!
     
    ad2310, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    AlpoHz Peon

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    It looks good for a first step. I agree with previous comment of changing star color. I also think that changing the background color would also help bring out the lid and it's color. Will the picture eventually be a 3D picture with some depth?
     
    AlpoHz, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    I would add some shining on the edges or something else to make it feel more like glass.
     
    Tsid, Dec 26, 2008 IP
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    #8
    it lacks something real big....it doesn;t really look like a bottle...
     
    campolar, Dec 27, 2008 IP
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    It's not bad but I think it would look better if you had some type of graphic
    directly above the text.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 27, 2008 IP
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    It's goods but not efficient .....
     
    jiet.jatin, Dec 29, 2008 IP
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    Fantastic. I would add a flare or glimmer of light to finish it off.
     
    johnhinds, Dec 29, 2008 IP
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    Oranges Active Member

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    #12
    Looks Good, but dont you think that typography could be better?
    Just my Honest opinion, else looks good.
     
    Oranges, Dec 29, 2008 IP
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    #13
    The perfume looks really nice, but i prefer a different background color
     
    ryuenplay, Dec 29, 2008 IP