I'm just after some general feedback.. Layout? Design? Ads? Features? Maybe even content? What do you think? http://www.jacks-lounge.com Thanks
You are using a standard wordpress theme. Thats okay, but then its nothing new I can't see any ads there, so hard to recommend anything.
I would say it is a very good start. What I would definitely improve is the menu. It is not visible at all. Also I think you should work on the right section Maybe changing color of title to black and changing the background would improve the feeling.