There is nothing I am specifically going to say is wrong with your page. Honestly the worst thing you can do is nit-pick to the point where you never really get things going. From what I have seen your page is good enough to start with, optimize from there. Just my 2 cents ... Josh
Thanks everyone for all your input! I decided to launch the product. I have launced it at $47, but decided to go with a happy fire sale of $27 to start of some good sales. The affiliate page is also up and running with affiliate tools. Hope it all goes well. Thanks for all the help everyone.