Hi all, I am just into my cool new project (a startup). I am hiding development secrets with a landing page. (here at: http://www.chilledlime.com) Could you check the page out and review it? Any critics, comments, questions are welcome Now my main question is: Is it viral enough? I meen does is have power to spread on social media like wildfire? If not, what could I improve on it so it could spread like that? Thanks very much for you time! Regards, Akos
Hello, I had a look on your page and here is my opinion.. There is too much white space in the background and the formatting of the text is not so strong to catch peoples' eyes.. For me it's like another page out of millions similar.. Also the content is not quite telling me: "Yes, I want this, I will give him my email address".. Sorry about these words, just wanted to be honest If the page is viral doesn't really depend on how the page looks like.. You have a connection to your social pages through the landing page, but in my opinion you should concentrate on building your connections on FB, Twitter etc. to let people know about it and to get them to mention to other people.. This is what makes it viral.. Hope it helps you
need to add "i want to tell my friends" kind of script... enable user to recommend their friends to read this...