Is this good on the eyes and readable ?

http://www.iollo.com

Comments please

 

Its certainly easy on the eyes and readable.
Is it a blog for reviews?

 

i dont know what it will be ... we will see ... my english is not so good so i am thinking what should i do with it ... please review those articles i have there and advice me on my english ... what should i improve. I really dont want to embarasse myself with this pour english of mine on website

 

good looking , and simple

 

Nice clean looking site.

If your going to talk about Software, Hardware and Gadgets I would make the header reflect this but I like the design.

 

i dont like fancy headers ... i like simple and clean after all this is not company website so header or logo is useless

 

The design is easy on the eyes.

One can tell that English is not your native language but you are doing a very good job with it. Much better I am sure than most of us would do with your native language.

Your style of writing is what I would call conversational and very polite. You are writing like you are speaking to us. I like that style and so do many others. It would be called casual writing not formal writing.

The only grammar error that needs to be corrected is when you use i. In English i is always I. If I were your editor that is the only change I would ask you to make.

Best wishes,

 

Nice design but, you need to proof read your grammar. Make sure you fix some of the error spellings and also choose your wording carefully; "STUFF" is a cute word but not professional.

Some people may not care about spelling or grammar errors. However you always need to stand out from the crowd and make sure that your site looks professional.

Good luck!

 

Nice design. It's very easy on the eyes and simple to navigate also.

I like it.

 

thanks for your comments... will change that STUFF thing to maybe all things reviews or something. Any suggestions which is really good english word for that kind of reviews?

As for spelling and grammar it is really hard not to make some mistakes hehe. oops i totally forgot that i have spellchecker .... it is time for me to start using it.

thank you again for your comments

 

Its certainly very easy on the eyes . It is very clan and simple which is great!

 

I am using a very similar color scheme on a site I am developing. Your site looks great.

 

well it is not done yet ... i am doing everything to make it uglier hehe .... ahh i am awake for too many hours .... good night all and thank you for your comments

 

fine and good looking !