Is this a good landing page?

Discussion in 'Affiliate Programs' started by emilgin, Aug 8, 2008.

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    So i just created my first landing page and i was wondering is this good or have i totally misunderstood the concept? :eek:


    Emilginang.com

    It's not finished but you get the idea
     
    emilgin, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  2. Wayne Liew

    Wayne Liew Banned

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    Sorry to say this but that is not a landing page.

    First of all, there is hardly any "selling" going on the page. Yes, you are trying to make people click that link of yours because of your experience of the product but what are the benefits of the product? Why your visitors should get the product? Why is it for them?

    Also, your page is full of exit paths which visitors will click to leave your site. Try to cut off as many navigation links as possible on your landing page.
     
    Wayne Liew, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  3. HarryLee

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    Maybe its just me, but the site kind of feels empty. You should add a headline and maybe a little bit more information about that product.
     
    HarryLee, Aug 8, 2008 IP