This is what I'm talking about: http://cashemergency.blogspot.com/p/make-money-online.html It should be very newbie friendly, but not useful to people who have been doing it for a while.
1. Needs a better more professional template, you can get those easily for free. Just search for blogger templates. Right now it seems too dull and I don't really feel like reading it at all. 2. Make money online right now. Seriously? It's a way too overused term. Try to think outside the box a little and make newbies eager to continue reading. I've found that for newbies it really makes sense to tell them they are going to earn a few hundred bucks in a short time (low money but they are newbies after all and have never made a penny online, they can relate!). 3. Affiliate Marketing - Again I wouldn't use such terms for newbies. They probably have no idea what it means and you should explain that later on. How about "Sell other peoples services" or something along those lines? That's all I could think right off the bat. I hope that has helped you