Well Perry, there's a problem. I made the changes you suggested then the sales went to zero. After I changed them all back, the sales came back. There is no way that ANYONE will put their face associated with this page. The is herpes we are talking about here. You obviously have no idea the shame that people have by having this disease. I appreciate your offer of help, but I am sticking with my copywriter and doing everything they say.
I am NOT a copywriting gurus, but may be you can think of 1.) What are the benefits for your products 2.) What makes you separate from your competitors 3.) What are the major of problems of your potential customers have? I mean you have to go deep in their mind set. For example, in Internet marketing, every webmaster wants more traffic or more money. If I create a product that shows them how to get $1,000 in a single day by doing say only 15 mins of work. then I guess most people will be interests to know more about the products immediately. For the layout tries to follow so called They call it A.I.D.A - Attention, Interest, Desire, Action. Hopes that help
"Sales," David??? Come on, let's get real here. Don't snow a pro. ~ All you basically did was to change the color of the background color, which was an ugly shade of green. In addition to that, the change was up for just a few days, if that long. And the change you made back was up for, what, one or two days. Mmmm'k. Sales are good at times, they suck at other times. That's all there was to it. Sorry, but I stand by what I suggested, which nearly all you have not done anyway, including some good ideas from others (again, let's keep this real here). You'll see what I am talking about, and in the past posts, after awhile. In fact, it is probably right now. No sales, or, maybe, one sale, and you will continue to see this. Um, David, if they are cured, why wouldn't they do this? Hmmmmm??? Uh, you are curing many of them, or helping them immensely, aren't ya? Example: Hmmmmm??? And you obviously have no idea how many sales pages, both off and online, are doing this right now. This has been done for, God knows, how many years. ... Including other embarrassing cases. Besides, it shows on other parts of the body. In many cases, they do not have to show their face but the before and after pics of the spots the herpes is on. You are, supposedly, a doctor, ND or not, and you don't know any of this??? You really need to do some research. But, anyway, if you really are a doctor, and this isn't a shit product, and you are pretty much full of it from your last post, I still do wish you luck with it.