Hey everybody, I just finished the sales page to my new website. I did the graphics, the video, and all of the sales copy (written text) myself. So I would appreciate if somebody would be nice enough to review all 3. The website is: http://tubelaunch.com Thanks in advance! Rick
Hi Rick, I'm a communication specialist and here goes a quick review of your site, as per my limited understanding: About the Video: I loved it, however it follows the classical template of sales oriented websites. One needs to understand, it is pretty difficult to grab and sustain attention of target audience with such a long video. A short video with more facts, and less individuals dancing around would have given your site a much mature image. BTW the speaker is beautiful About the Colour: Red is an energetic colour. It improves the brain's ability to note down details. It is fine, but dark red is sometimes attributed to negativity. Now its entirely your choice what shade you think is best for yours. Sales Pitch: Very traditional format. Again long and repetitive. Let's make it concise and appeal audience to your USP. Explain everything in a short and concise paragraph and then include details later on. In a nutshell, if you want to market your product, you need to be different and stop being a sheep in crowd. Please note that this is just an honest opinion. In the end its your website, and you can do whatever you feel like. Best of luck. Cheers!
Thank you TopNotch, I was thinking that the video may be a bit long, so its good to get another opinion that agrees. You are right about red sometimes being a negative color, but i went with red to like you said "not be a sheep in the crowd" Everybody's website is blue, so i thought i would switch it up. Thank you for your review friend.