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Is my Website Service Site Any Good?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by BlueOrchard, Jun 19, 2011.

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    http://blueorchard.co.cc/

    First of all, the "co.cc" is temporary right now. Don't bug me about that please :p.
    Secondly, can you give me a better name for the site? I can't think of anything better, So it's just "BlueOrchard's Web Services" right now.
    SEMrush
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 19, 2011 IP
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  2. BlueOrchard

    BlueOrchard Peon

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    Anyone Gonna Review it?
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 20, 2011 IP
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    #3
    You can improve your design. StandardTheme is not a very beautiful one.
     
    ankurbharali, Jun 20, 2011 IP
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    clinton Well-Known Member

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    What kind of web services do you do? What is it that you're trying to sell?
     
    clinton, Jun 21, 2011 IP
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    BlueOrchard Peon

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    I wasn't trying to sell on this specific thread, but I offer backlinking services and article writing services also :D
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 21, 2011 IP
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    yoX64 Peon

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    #6
    Try to make your own template, created by you. That will help your visitors to have more credibility in you when you say "we are pro". Don`t use templates from the internet or something like that.

    And another thing..try to add some services that are less expensive, because not many people would pay at lest $60 for some backlinks. Some people are not that rich..
     
    yoX64, Jun 21, 2011 IP
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    am sorry but well it looks like u just installed a theme and thats it.. try working more on it
     
    daxguy, Jun 21, 2011 IP
  8. BlueOrchard

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    Yeah I was gonna add some cheaper $30 services. I really can't get much lower because I do quality stuff and $10-20 would make me feel like im working for nothing.
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 21, 2011 IP
  9. BlueOrchard

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    Okay guys. I overhauled the site and it looks alot better now. I'll be adding cheaper services soon. But for now, tell me what you think :D
     
    Last edited: Jun 21, 2011
    BlueOrchard, Jun 21, 2011 IP
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    Honestly, I would re-do the text that is in the slider. If you're "professionals", talk like them as well to lure your customers in. This kind of talk might make them stray away. Just some friendly advice. Good luck!
     
    GoBuckeyes02, Jun 21, 2011 IP
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    It is good, but do change ur domain asap
     
    joblabs, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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    dh86 Active Member

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    true say. its good but get on with domain
     
    dh86, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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    #13
    Too dark - need one more light colour, and make the main dark grey lighter.
    Too empty - consider adding more info/images/bigger menu items, less empty spaces.
    Those elegant backround flower ornaments - are flowers really fit into your site's topic? Are you a gardener or sell flowers? Or maybe you are a spa or beauty parlour website? You know what I mean...
     
    redvel, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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    #14
    Appreciate the comment! I took your advice and changed the text in the slider! Please check it out now and suggest more improvements if you can :)

    You can be harsh. I can take it! I will do anything do make visitors on my site stay!
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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    GoBuckeyes02 Guest

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    I'm definitely not being harsh, so don't think I am. See, you have to focus on every little word on your site since the service you are trying to sell directly relates to your content, and people can judge your service by looking at the content on your site. Now, for the slider again, for the "quality articles" part, I would delete the last 2 lines under it and put something like "100% unique and high quality." Use that area to describe your service a little bit. People know their rankings will raise or be maintained with the articles, so reassure them that you provide them with stuff they can rely on and use.

    With that said, since I helped you, do you want to do a free list for me on my list site, www.ListsHere.com? =) I can put a link from the list you make back to your site, so you get a backlink too.

    Good luck with the site!
     
    GoBuckeyes02, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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    PLEASE DO NOT use FREE domain
     
    newpig, Jun 22, 2011 IP
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  19. BlueOrchard

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    #19
    I wasnt saying you WERE harsh :p
    A list as in a list of backlinks?
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 23, 2011 IP
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    Yeah, but not at the moment. Right now, I bundle packages, so you need to buy the backlinks too. I will probably add a service dedicated to articles only later on today or tomorrow.
     
    BlueOrchard, Jun 23, 2011 IP