http://blueorchard.co.cc/ First of all, the "co.cc" is temporary right now. Don't bug me about that please . Secondly, can you give me a better name for the site? I can't think of anything better, So it's just "BlueOrchard's Web Services" right now.
I wasn't trying to sell on this specific thread, but I offer backlinking services and article writing services also
Try to make your own template, created by you. That will help your visitors to have more credibility in you when you say "we are pro". Don`t use templates from the internet or something like that. And another thing..try to add some services that are less expensive, because not many people would pay at lest $60 for some backlinks. Some people are not that rich..
Yeah I was gonna add some cheaper $30 services. I really can't get much lower because I do quality stuff and $10-20 would make me feel like im working for nothing.
Okay guys. I overhauled the site and it looks alot better now. I'll be adding cheaper services soon. But for now, tell me what you think
Honestly, I would re-do the text that is in the slider. If you're "professionals", talk like them as well to lure your customers in. This kind of talk might make them stray away. Just some friendly advice. Good luck!
Too dark - need one more light colour, and make the main dark grey lighter. Too empty - consider adding more info/images/bigger menu items, less empty spaces. Those elegant backround flower ornaments - are flowers really fit into your site's topic? Are you a gardener or sell flowers? Or maybe you are a spa or beauty parlour website? You know what I mean...
Appreciate the comment! I took your advice and changed the text in the slider! Please check it out now and suggest more improvements if you can You can be harsh. I can take it! I will do anything do make visitors on my site stay!
I'm definitely not being harsh, so don't think I am. See, you have to focus on every little word on your site since the service you are trying to sell directly relates to your content, and people can judge your service by looking at the content on your site. Now, for the slider again, for the "quality articles" part, I would delete the last 2 lines under it and put something like "100% unique and high quality." Use that area to describe your service a little bit. People know their rankings will raise or be maintained with the articles, so reassure them that you provide them with stuff they can rely on and use. With that said, since I helped you, do you want to do a free list for me on my list site, www.ListsHere.com? =) I can put a link from the list you make back to your site, so you get a backlink too. Good luck with the site!
Site is search engine friendly but could use some work. Here is your report "Pro" http://www.aboutus.org/BlueOrchard.co.cc#home-page-analysis- No charge for the free link.
Yeah, but not at the moment. Right now, I bundle packages, so you need to buy the backlinks too. I will probably add a service dedicated to articles only later on today or tomorrow.