is my magazine ok?

hi..i created this magazine for my MM project..

its jus a simple magazine(based on existing magazine)

can anyone rate this magazine for me?

 

wow its looking awesome, its perfect i think

 

The Word EMPIRE is destroying All the Beauty!!

Change its looks, And Font Too Maybe, and You Are Looking Like Premium!!

~ExP~

 

@newlogo- ty..

@extremephp- the reason of 'EMPIRE' font is bcoz its based on existing magazine cover...so i had to choose fonts which almost close to the real magazine font..anyways thx for commenting...

 

The last AirBender should come little down and also EMPIRE is not looking great to me also. try some workaround

 

Looks Good man!! Congrats Dude!!

 

@marshalprince- k i wil make abit change on the fonts..ty for the advice..

@digisecrets- ty man...

 

Looks great! I think I would move the guy down a little bit. The title is covering his head.

 

@busymomblog- u r rite..thx for the info man..

 

wow...its great! I like your design...thanks for share

 

@sanchyclub-thx for the support man..

 

Interesting very cool! You should try making a gaming one. Text could be fixed up a bit more though.

 

@cablebox-thx man..will try gaming one..

 

Good design men.. I hope you included the resident evil : after life. It's also one of the great movie now!

 

Change the 'EMPIRE' font.
And dont use so much blending on a mag cover Use different colors in a chosen color scheme will be better.

 

@cecille20-thx for the support

@dragonbyte-what font do u suggest?i am jus a begginer..
i will remember the blending stuff next time...

 

oh ya guys..feel free to check my logo too..need advice.. http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=1937945

 

mind blowing n awesome how on the earth do u manage to do such an excellent job!

 

@unknownpray-wow thx for the commect man..i am just beginner..i have so much more to learn...

don forget to advice me on my logo..link in on the #17 post..

 

Why not trying some sans-serif fonts? Such as Helvetica, Arial...