Is my email up to scratch? Please proof read.

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by deb0and, Feb 28, 2008.

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    Ok so i have drafted this email to hopefully to get me some advertisers i was wondering if any marketing gurus could improve on it for me so here goes.....

    This the subjest title ....www.caravanineurope.co.uk a highly ranked Website on Google/Yahoo which offers you to advertise your campsite for free


    Dear proprietor

    Advertise your campsite/holiday park on my new website http://www.caravanineurope.co.uk with either a free text listing for the first year or for only 30 pounds you can upgrade your advert to have pictures, a link to your own website and a unquie password to edit and update your listing anytime. This is much cheaper and better value than other sites found on google etc. To see the great benefits of both please click here http://www.caravanineurope.co.uk/?page=advhere.

    Also my website is not just been designed for advertising it has a caravan forum which allows you to chat to other caravaners, a place to buy caravan equipment, handy tips on what you need to take in your car/caravan and not to mention other caravan sites in Europe to visit. I am listed on all major search engines, which helps attract people looking for places to stay in and around Europe and receiving on average 600 unique visitors and day.

    To see a current advert listed on my site please click here http://www.caravanineurope.co.uk/?page=advs (NB* this is a paid listing)

    Take a look at my website and see if you are interested but please don’t miss out on an average of 600 people potentially viewing your site a day. As you have nothing to loose by advertising for free, only more bookings.

    Thank you for your time and please feel free to e-mail me if you have any queries.

    Kind Regards
     
    deb0and, Feb 28, 2008 IP