Is My Advertisement Phrase Good Enough For Getting Clicks??

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by nhatle84, Apr 12, 2010.

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    I'm about to buy an advertisement spot from this guy newsletter and hopefully generates plenty of clicks for it, but I'm not sure how to make some good catchy phrase for more clicks.

    Check it out.. here's my phrase :)

    What you guys think? Are there any better way of phrasing it? Please rate 1 to 5 (5 for mos likely clicked). Any suggestion to make it better?
    -Minh
     
    nhatle84, Apr 12, 2010 IP