Is it 'Software that helps you improve!' or 'Software that helps you to improve!' ?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by Dominique.be, Dec 3, 2007.

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    I'm writing a catch line for my logo and would like to know which one to use... and if one is better, why?

    - Software that helps you improve!
    - Software that helps you to improve!

    We offer software for quality assessment and customers can improve their business by using it.

    Thanks a lot in advance!

    Dominique
     
    Dominique.be, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  2. bestsoftworks

    bestsoftworks Peon

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    I like .... "Software that helps you improve"

    It's simpler and to the point. That extra "to" gets in the way. The "to improve" is probably more grammatically correct but who is going to know the difference but english teachers?

    I'm rusty on english rules. Make sure it's not supposed to be "which helps".

    David Beyer
     
    bestsoftworks, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  3. buntoo

    buntoo Well-Known Member

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    shouldnt u use "which" instead?
    but apart from grammar issues, the first one seems better.
     
    buntoo, Dec 3, 2007 IP
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    nursehoney Active Member

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    Or you could skirt the whole 'which or that' issue and say:

    Software to help you improve!

    Honey
     
    nursehoney, Dec 4, 2007 IP
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    jagan123 Active Member

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    Is the software that helps you improve
     
    jagan123, Dec 15, 2007 IP