InvisionBlue.Com Review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Scott Botkins, Jun 25, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hello Everyone,

    It's 315am my time, I couldn't sleep so I got out of bed and made a lot of changes to my web design business website. http://www.invisionblue.com how's it look? And is it easy to navigate? Thanks!
     
    Scott Botkins, Jun 25, 2006 IP
  2. kedaar

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    Looks Good
     
    kedaar, Jun 25, 2006 IP
  3. KC TAN

    KC TAN Well-Known Member

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    Hi Scott,

    Your site is neat and clean :)
    I do not have any critics for your site design but I do have some suggestions in terms of SEO and spam prevention.

    First, I noticed that you do not have a unique title for every pages, this is pretty bad because you are telling the search engine that all your content is related to 'Invision Blue'... try to add in the keywords you are targeting into the titles so that search engine knows what specified content you have on different pages.

    Second, in your Urgent help page, you leave an alternate Email address link at the bottom of page. This link will be picked up by the spammers soon and you will find yourself receiving junk mails several weeks later. My advice is to replace the @ with other characters or simply delete the alternate Email. Your contact form is more than enough :)
     
    KC TAN, Jun 25, 2006 IP
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    LOoks great like the colours that are blue or fadings of it
     
    Elie, Jun 25, 2006 IP
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    Hello site and design looks good. You may want to look at the copy. Much of it can be rewritten to sharpen your message. For example (from the Visual Tour):
    "Invision Blue was created to help businesses succeed online. Our passion can be found in web development and our motivation is success, without dedication and hard work we believe there is no way to success."

    eliminate the passive voice and negatives:

    "Invision Blue helps businesses succeed online. Our passion is web development and our motivation is success. Let Invision Blue's dedication and hard work lead you to success."

    Good luck,
    Ty
     
    tkroll, Jun 25, 2006 IP
  6. Scott Botkins

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    Thanks so far for the advice and reviews.
     
    Scott Botkins, Jun 25, 2006 IP
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    Looks good Scott! Professional!
     
    Shiffy, Jun 25, 2006 IP
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    I just updated the visual tour and even added a voice over in it :)
     
    Scott Botkins, Jun 25, 2006 IP
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    Looks good! The voice freaked me out. :eek:
     
    tkroll, Jun 27, 2006 IP
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    pc_user Notable Member

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    You have a partners page. I would have an option to have people join as a partner. Good design.
     
    pc_user, Jun 27, 2006 IP