Invisible Valentine

Discussion in 'Movies, Music & TV' started by tonyiam, Feb 14, 2007.

  1. #1
    Every year Valentine's Day
    comes and goes for me.
    It's just another lonely
    day of February.

    Not once in my pathetic life
    have I received a card or a rose.
    Well, maybe when it was required
    in kindergarten, I suppose.

    But never once with feeling
    of completeness of life.
    Never from someone whom I wish
    would eventually be my wife.

    Someone to share my life
    with every single day.
    Someone I could admire
    in every single way.

    Never once have I ever heard,
    "Will you be my Valentine?"
    Never even drank out of
    each other's glass of wine.

    I've never been able to give a
    girl a heart shaped diamond ring.
    Never been able to write a
    Valentine's song I could sing.

    Although I'm not a good singer,
    at least I can write;
    write a poem about me and her
    being together every night.

    I know what you're thinking,
    "I'm not amused."
    Or, me trying to be funny
    may have you confused.

    Anyway, I need to talk about
    Valentine's day somemore.
    I've never had a girl who I
    could melt to the core.

    Someone who I could kiss and
    hold from sunset to sunrise;
    who, if I took her to a Sweetheart
    pageant, she would get first prize.

    I know that last one
    sounded a little cheesy.
    But I want someone who E-40
    would call, "Off The Heezy!"

    But, now I have to get
    very truly serious.
    I've never had a Valentine
    who's scent made me delirious.

    Sometimes I wish Valentine's
    Day was never even created.
    I've felt like I'm the only
    guy the entire world hated.

    Valantine's day shouldn't
    even really have to exist.
    Every day should be Valentine's
    Day on the list.

    I would show how I feel about
    her without having to speak;
    write "Valentine's Day" on her
    calendar for every day of the week.

    Say, "I Love You" every
    single chance that you get.
    And look to the stars every
    night to give thanks that you met.

    Not once have I ever given
    a card that says, "Be Mine."
    Every single day of my life
    I have an "Invisible Valentine."
     
    tonyiam, Feb 14, 2007 IP
  2. amnezia

    amnezia Peon

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    #2
    women are expensive, you got off lightly
     
    amnezia, Feb 14, 2007 IP
  3. rays

    rays Active Member

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    #3
    nice one mate ... seems like we both are traveling in a parallel ship ..

    keep up the good work
     
    rays, Feb 15, 2007 IP
  4. KingofKings

    KingofKings Banned

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    #4
    I don't know if you wrote that, or you copied that from somewhere... But that poem is very very cool. :)
     
    KingofKings, Feb 15, 2007 IP
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    If you think that's bad, imagine my situation whose husband didn't even acknowledge me on that day. :/
     
    meganerd, Feb 15, 2007 IP
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    *SUNNY* Banned

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    #6
    Yes the poem is really fantastic.
     
    *SUNNY*, Feb 15, 2007 IP
  7. bluemouse2

    bluemouse2 Well-Known Member

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    #7
    great poem and sad message... I hope you will find your Valentine soon
     
    bluemouse2, Feb 17, 2007 IP