I'm Coming Out With My First Product: Please Review

I was wondering the same thing..Yeah what does it mean, is it for SEO purposes?
IFW - ?

 

It is all explained in the e-book, I'd rather not give too many details out on an open forum.

I can give free copies away to affiliates at DP who can write testimonials

 

great flashy site design.
I would recommend that you pit in a bit more detail in the sales page so the buyer knows what they are getting in to. Also getting an email form with an enabled auto responder(aweber) wouldn't be a bad idea.

 

A lot of the criticism has been that there is not a lot of information on the actual sales page. The thing is that if most buyers are being referred to my sales page via landing pages/review sites that are giving me the "thumbs up" and I have the Paypal screenshots to add to the social factor (w/ the testimonials), then I think that those two things combined should be enough to convince potential buyers.

I have made changes to the headline and sales page though as mentioned in earlier posts (Thanks!)

Do you guys think that will fly?

 

I would like to know how much conversion you have made till the date.

 

I'm still running split-tests, i'll get back to you when i'm finished.

Thank you for inquiring

 

You should at least address the IFW in your sales letter. Hint at what it is. The reader will be wondering, and if you don't even mention it, they might feel stupid for not knowing, or simply disregard your offer because they don't know enough about it.

You could turn it into a big selling point if you frame it properly. Pitch it as a big mystery, and a big secret, and the real secret to earning money. I know you're doing that with the book itself, but you can hint at the method and relate it to the "IFW" as well.

If you don't, it just looks a bit weird, I think.

 

I guess that you have a point. I don't want to turn away buyers that don't know what an IFW is. I'll work on this later today

Thank you

 

Yeah but those sales could have come from anywhere. What I want to know is if I buy the product and really work at it will I be successful or are we talking about something that was hot five years ago. Sorry for if I sound skeptical but I cant promote a product until I believe in it.

 

I would like a review copy, I have sent you a PM.

Cheers

JZ

 

I like the look of your program. If you're looking for further testimonials, I would be happy to review it for you.
-jim

 

Hey TigerPublishing,
I recently added to the sales page after reading your great comments and have added an additional paragraph explaining what is going on. To me, it looks great now. What do you think?

 

One typo stuck out when I was proof reading. "I before E except after C"

Now that I know just how straight forward it is i beleive I could turn this into quite a lucrative business.

 

Changed, thank you for that. I'm not sure why spellecheck did not catch that

 

Nice design, however the thing that grabbed me was the 2009 on the Ebook cover and 2007 screen shots for paypal. You really do need to update these ... Good luck

 

Thanks for the design compliment. [The work was done by inzpiration]

I'm just trying to show that i've been doing this for 2 years. I've been thinking about uploading in addition another picture that is more recent

 

Hi.

I think I see the paragraph you mean... and it's good.. but it still doesn't explicitly mention the "IFW" part of the name. After reading it, I know you're about affiliate marketing, which is great, but I still have no clue what IFW means (and I know a lot about affiliate marketing!)

Oh, and about the PayPal screenshots - yes, you absolutely should include some recent ones. Having both would be very good proof indeed. But as someone else said above, they could be from anything. Is there any way you can be more clear with the proof and show that it's a result of your IFW strategy?

One last thing - break up your paragraphs a little. Some are quite long. People like short nuggets of information at once.